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My mind is in the darkness,
i cannot get it out.
It fills me with great sadness,
and an awfull lot of dout.
When I try to think,
the thoughts get clouded over,
shrouded by thick blankets,
one after the other.
I cannot see the light,
I won't for a while,
but that will all end,
when i start to smile.
For when I smile I'm filled with joy,
and out of great depression,
it makes my brain feel like it's out of the heavy compression.
Daily,my friends will make me laugh,
and that will never change,
then my mind jumps out of the darkness and I don't fell as strange.
The shrouded mist clears and i can see once again,
all because of the smile my friends gave me.
- by blueRose98 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: blackness
- Artist: blueRose98
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Description:
i dont know. my life had sunken into something i couldn't get it out of.
(befor what had happened) - Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: blackness smile friends mind
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Blade Nebula - 07/13/2009
- O wow! =O This is a great poem ^^ I love the erratic rhyming scheme and the 'story' behind the poem =) I get this picture of bright smiles that chase away the dark clouds of sadness *nods head* Please keep writing! =D
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- blueRose98 - 12/04/2008
- plz comment , it makes me happy when i see peopls opinions about my writing. even if its not nice to sya voice your opinion ^_^ .
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