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Sorrow-filled eyes flood their rain,
As memories of you renew my pain.
Innocence decay,
My Happiness away,
Where are you Father?
I need your aid,
Where are you Father?
No love remains.
How can you not see,
This darkness you made inside of me?
Misery, my only friend now,
Hate myself, you taught me how..
Where are you father?
My soul turned black.
Where are you father?
Merciless was your attack.
Hatred paved my road,
because Hatred was all you showed.
Eternally caged,
Forever enraged,
Where are you now father?
Hope Satan treats you well,
Where are you now father?
As you slowly rot in Hell.
- Title: Father (Poem)
- Artist: Zuljee
- Description: A poem I wrote a while back while under emotional distress. Was proud of it, and still am, so I decided to get some criticism for my work.
- Date: 07/09/2009
- Tags: father poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- I S u i m i n I - 07/30/2009
- WOAH!!!
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- PikaPowerx3 - 07/12/2009
- This is great, absolutely love it. Great choice of words and flows wonderfully. I was hoping to see what the meaning and inspiration behind it was though.
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- -Tessifer - 07/10/2009
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I love it.
10000/5 stars.
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