secrets

• Artist: twilight_earth
• Description: this is not ryming or phases. its a story about how i turned out, its me
• Date: 06/21/2009
• Tags: secrets

if u hold it in,
say nothing,
thinking it will pass,
knowing it won't,
hoping to tell,
but never will,
locked away for good,
unless............u let someone in.
and if u don't, remember.....
secrets can destroy u if u don't let them out.

-MiNdLeSs StUfF

Comments

[WhiteMageBef]

This could honestly use a major upgrade with both proper grammar let alone with passion and for god sake a ryhme scheme. Also to top it off this poem if called so is if not to a extreme, then to a high standard is a cleche completely.
If you mean to write a 'story' so to say, then leave this to the stories, if no then get started on those Poems and Lyrics!