up and down

• Artist: cantstopcrazy
• Description: i dont remeberexcatly what i wrote this poem abotu but i think it is about the moon. we both seem fine on the outside yet want what we can not have.
• Date: 02/05/2009
• Tags: down moon tears happy sadness

There you are,
Here I lie.
You above,
Seem so high.
Starring up,
At you,
So full of yourself.
You laught at me,
being stuck down here.
I laught at you,
for expecting me up there.
You hear my secerts,
though this time,
Leaving your dark side behind.
We sigh wanting one another,
And share tears undercover.
We share the same mask you and I,
But you up there,
And down here am I.

Comments

[cantstopcrazy]

thx.

[carosene]

Kind of interesting, though a little hard to follow. The moon makes it make more sense, and the ending has a nice sense of closure.