Little Girl use your weapon

• Artist: ll KatiiBear ll
• Description: It's just another poem that i wrote when i was younger.
• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: little girl your weapon

Little girl
I saw them laughing at you
I saw tears paint your face
I saw what they make you live up to

Little girl
Roll up your sleeves
Give them a fight
Get them to believe

Little girl
You’re just like magic
Indestructible like the sky
Have power to make tragic
Power to make them see eye to eye

Little girl
Don’t give them an end
Just give them a story
Just give them something
To make them sorry

Little girl
You remind me of myself
Even though you’re a lonely loner
You need to assert yourself
Be your own property owner

Don’t be killed on the blacktop
With their invisible guns
You only need a single prop
To complete this bombing run

Use your voice little one, use your weapon.

Comments

[Jarmis]

It's got some issues with the meter and pacing, and it sorta looks like you used some of the words just to make things rhyme, but it's really not bad.

Keep up the writing wink

[vanessa_m]

it's cute