• Version one
    My happiness is jacked away,in some hidden unknown destination,
    but the inquire is,where is my happiness,
    what passageway do I need
    to take to find the happiness,you
    got the last bit of my sanity
    I owned and shanked until it
    was skinless,but the next inquire
    is,how do we patch sanity's skin
    back on and heal it's wounds?
    When it's been
    dismantled and ripped into pieces?

    Version 2

    My happiness is jacked away,in some hidden unknown destination,
    but the inquiry is,where is my happiness,
    what passageway do I need
    to take to find the happiness,you
    got the last bit of my sanity
    I owned and shanked until it
    was skinless,but the next inquiry
    is,how do we patch sanity's skin
    back on and heal it's wounds?
    When it's been
    dismantled and ripped into pieces?

    Copyrighted by
    fishyseaz v2,saying this piece
    of work is yours,can get you
    punished by the law.

    (please comment and also rate crits are aloud,and also
    tell me ways to improve) (and btw yes alot of things i said in this poem is metaphores)
    And also tell me wich version you liked better.