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The words I cannot convey,
Are the words I want most to say.
Though try as I might,
I dare not bring my feelings to light.
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I would like to speak through looks,
But that is an ability only found in books.
A furtive glance in his direction,
Too embarrassed to make eye connection.
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The words unspoken, are more controlled,
A misspoken word cannot be annulled.
Unlike words, a gaze and a touch,
Can portray feeling just as much.
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Feeling strongly for him, but not knowing how to show it,
When written quite plainly, he will probably know it.
The unspoken words can be more potent,
When written to capture the feelings of a magical moment.
- Title: Unspoken Words
- Artist: Skreamish
- Description: Here is a poem I wrote for a Valentine's Day Contest in one of my guilds. I've gotten some pretty nice comments on it, and thought that I might as well post it. It comes from a secret admirer's point of view, and how she desperately wants to tell this boy her feelings, but doesn't know the best way to do so. I hope you enjoy, and comment!
- Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: unspoken words
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kichi_Dust_Bunny - 03/20/2009
- Good job! Its very relate-able, in my opinion.
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- Prophetic Darkness - 02/01/2009
- Very nice rhyme scheme and I like the poem! The second stanza in particular has a very good meter. I also like how you didn't make the poem particularly sad, just a statement of how things are, how they could be,
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- xoxoKymmi - 02/01/2009
- I love this! <3
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- gleedemon - 01/31/2009
- I rather enjoyed this. Keep writing.
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