Darkness in my Heart

• Artist: Ryuko-yuki
• Description: I had a sort-of depression period, and well, I started to write. And that sparked a hidden "talent" I have. This it the first poem I wrote. Pleeease don't laugh. The few people I've shown it to said I should publish it, so....here's my first step! Please comment about how you think about it.
• Date: 01/08/2009
• Tags: darkness heart

The darkness inside my heart
I wish I could explain
Why I have these dark feelings
Just to ease my pain

The darkness inside my heart
I'm slowly going insane
I wish to stand in a raging storm
Consumed by it's icy rain

The darkness inside my heart
I'm becomming a soul-less doll
No more feelings, no more emotions
Because the evil took it all

The darkness inside my heart
Fills me with rage and hate
You think there's still time to save me
Try, it's already too late

The darkness inside me heart
I want it to go away
But in this war inside me heart
I no longer have a say

The darkness inside my heart
I'm slowly dying alone
And with the things my heart has done
With my life I must atone

The darkness inside my heart
Inside I feel hollow and frozen
But the sad horrible truth is
This is the path I've chosen...

*** I have a 2nd part called "Recovery." If you liked it, tell me and I'll post it!***

Comments

[Rayza4242]

Good job. You do have good talent. Keep up the good work.

[dreamheartnz]

i like it :]