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In a forgotten space
A young girl lies dead
With Such a pale face
And puddles of blood red.
It was a disaster
With blood everywhere
Finding the nine millimeter
Just made it a nightmare.
The girl that lies dead
Is no one but I
With a bullet in my head
I say goodbye.
- by Elven_Night-Warrior |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Forgotten
- Artist: Elven_Night-Warrior
- Description: A poem i wrote when i was upset. Its very sad. Oh and I cant spell for s**t so sorry if there are any mistakes.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: forgotten
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Comments (3 Comments)
- X --- Imperfectiion - 03/10/2009
- welll i didnt find any spelling errors, but sometimes i cant spell for crap either, but i at lest know its spelled wrong...it was great! i can write a poem just like that, well i have, but it was longer...srry for such a long comment
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- ll ForeverAndalways ll - 12/12/2008
- well there might my spelling errors But i still like it. ^^ 4/5 <3
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- Needs a lot of work and touching up. "pale" not "pail". 1.75/5.
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