My Black Heart- emo poem

• Artist: nicolexemo
• Description: poem i made. sorry it's not AMAZING but i made it in like 5 minutes :/
  
  
  if you do like this poem please tell me and I'll make more. some will be sad and happy. i do requests (:
• Date: 03/02/2009
• Tags: black heart heartbroken heart broken

My heart, growing blacker by heart break, by fight, by unbearable thoughts and dreams, seems to die, faster and faster. Like a roller coaster it slides up and down fast. fast… fast…

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Comments

[Zane Gray 305]

as a writer my self i write ddark and mines more complex this is somewhat saddending yet refreshing to me because its showing the pain of emotion yet still giving a visual simily so bravo its beatiful plz write more smile

[um jello]

it was pretty good you should write more

[liltinkerbell1]

that was awesome keep writing rate mine 2 if u want

[xx_im_emo_ru_xx]

not AMAZING???!!!!! u must be crazy that waz better than amazing