history

• Artist: zebppir
• Description: just me thinking on somethings
  
  no ego stroking
  
  just an honest critique
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: rambling

what will history say?

is this the beginning of a new age?

or the end of the old?

may the fate look kindly

on this age

pray it not born in an cacophony of the screams of the wounded and the dying

may it be not be baptized in blood for what starts in blood will end in blood

will the future generations of our flesh be discouraged
to try something new?

Is it our fault that humanity's imgination
our greatest tool be dulled by what was but not is?

Ideas once impossible

maybe a very real possibilty


History be kind when you look upon my generation

who's pitiful grip on reality and its greatest invention science

only made more questions in place of those which where unmasked

its sad that the world is the same its just..... feels flat


two dimensional

in a world that supposed to span three

have mercy as we descend

time will tell if we were worthy

but what gift will our age give to all the future young ones

when even our bones are dust

will it be lasting?

Comments

[4ever_lost in_ ur eyes]

thats great. I found it very interesting

[Captain Christine-Daae]

Nice! Good questions too. biggrin

[The Garden of Eatin]

since i didnt read it i give you what the girl under me did
i like foxes
go meat
-Remember in PE we fought (i was a wet towel after PE) you pushed me around
(oops)

[Sorikia525]

That's really eloquently put, ^_^

And that's not just ego stroking, it really is good.