crying and weeping

• Artist: darknessinlife
• Description: this poem i was crying while witting much like all other poems of mine its kinda self explanatory it says that i am goth but this was a while ago and i am now Emo
  uhh in the last stanza it say that i receive love from family and friends but now it doesnt feel like i receive love from anyone anymore...
  i feel betrayed
• Date: 04/04/2009
• Tags: crying weeping

i am goth
i will not deny that
but yet i cry and weep
i will smile for my friends

i will smile for my friends
on a bad day or good
but yet i still cry and weep
i do now why but regret

i am jealous of everyone
who has had someone
someone who loves them dearly
for i hate being jealous of that

i receive love from family
i receive love from friends
but what i truly want
is love love from some one i love

Comments

[xMoonlight_Butterflyx]

i can understand tat now V.

[scitama]

Nice poem. Hopefully things cheer up! You made me smile the other day biggrin

[Adorable_Hunny_Luv]

i understand that

[xXDark_ImprisonmentXx]

I get it

[Ryosei_Hime]

A little late on responding to the comment you made on my poem, but I always read if I'm asked. ^^; This one is easy for me to relate to, for anyone who's been alone that way. M'Goth, meself. X3 Anyways, it has good feeling, that's certain, and that's the point of poetry. Technical-wise, work on your grammar and spelling. I won't say punctuation and capitalization because that's irrelevant in a poem.