a rose by any other name

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: special thnxx 2 faten 4 helpin me on dis 1
  and plzz tell me wat u think of dis/my other poem(s)
• Date: 07/29/2008
• Tags: theoverlordofamsterdam arosebyanyothername

you lived your life not knowing who i am
you lied, you cheated and pretended you cared
beautiful on the outside
but painful to hold

like a rose and its thorns
you've protreyed
like a rose and its thorns
you've left me in pain

i thought i loved you
i thought you loved me
but it was all a lie
none of it was true

dead i will lay
with one memory of you
a black rose by my side
in my grave we will lie

Comments

[Haruka Misaki Kazusaki]

Great poem, it's so well written with a crafty rhythmic pattern and scheme. Your words flowed like the leaves in a autumn wind as the clouds blow over. Very beautiful, keep it up.

[SmartPsycho]

i love it its soooo beautiful