Insecurity

• Artist: Midnite_Angel666
• Description: I wrote this when I was worried that my friend was going to break her promise and steal my boyfriend. Which she did the day after i wrote this........Please make a good vote.......
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags:

When I looked at you,
You turned away,
Did u really miss me today,
I have this feeling,
That you don't love me,
But this feeling is only insecurity,
And still it's there,
My happyness is fading,
Yet I am still waiting,
For the answer,
Are you sure you love me more than her,
Are you really sure...........

Comments

[Beautiful x Mayhem]

I'm so sorry sad But the poem is amazing, and you should definitely keep writing them <3 no criticism 5/5

[coffeeinteapots]

I totally love it (:
It all makes sense and your a good poet (;
A good poet shows his or her feelings and aren't afraid of what others have to say (;
Sorry about that D;
4/5 (;
Good luck and best wishes <3

[Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind]

It's pretty good. There's a few typos, but that's pretty much the only critisism I have. 4/5

[Midnite_Angel666]

Thanx. mrgreen

[DeathRider796]

I love it it rocks its really good!!!! cool

[Midnite_Angel666]

It's ok. I let everything out wen i rite poems. Writing poems is my life!