rising star

• Artist: cantstopcrazy
• Description: the words were floating in my head so i took them out and complied this song. the tune is a mix between several different opening themes from animes i watch. i got some of the inspiration for the words from them too. this is an original song so please don't take it. this is one of the few songs Ive written so its not that good. please comment about your thoughts or with any advice.
• Date: 01/04/2010
• Tags: rising star song

Wrap me in your warmth
Lead me by the hand.
Show me out of this enchanted land

Ill follow you out of this curse,
The real world cant be much worse than this sugar coated hell.
To be able to truly breathe, what a gift that would be,
A shinning star in the heavens.

This world is warped in its false peace,
Showing joy that's really tragedy.
Held down by these chains,
Soaked by the never ending rain
Wont someone let me free?

Shadows swirl all around,
Trying hard to slow you down,
Before you can flee with me.

Your white wings appear carrying us away,
Into the bright shinning stars.

Comments

[Daily Night]

I don't recall which I said was my favorite of your poems, but now it's this one. But, it might be because it reminds me of how I feel about...something, so maybe it's unfair of me to like this one most. Still, I do. Well, for now anyway.

[cantstopcrazy]

thx. i tend to write poetry though so i have a hard time creating a tune and sticking with it.

[-max-15-dream-]

wow.....ur really good. thats awesome!!!! ^^