Abuse

• Artist: XX_vAmPiRe_MiMe_XX
• Description: One of my bestest friends was abused and it was awful. She was very sad and she wanted to just disappear. She was frightened after she told me about it and she was scared. I reassured her that the pain would stop and she's okay now because i got some help for her and now all is well. I wrote this poem for her so she could have hope again and this is how i thought she felt like during the unfourtunate situation. so here is my short poem for you guys to read. Please comment and rate thank you.
• Date: 08/12/2009
• Tags: abuse sadness hope depression

Abuse


Watching
Waiting
Is he coming?
I wish i could,
I wish i would
Escape
Drenched in
My own pain
No one
To save me
I'm crying
I'm dying
I'm on my knees
For the final toll
The last strike
There is no love
Just pain,
Depression
No hope
No life
Just pain and hurt
Let me die

Comments

[Becoming_Nobody]

That was really good! The rhythm broke in a few places but you got it right back! Great job 4/5 (Will you also check out some of my stuff too? Thanks!! smile ) WONDERFUL JOB!!!!!