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The day i layed eyes on you , you were sweet cool
always flirty treated me that im the luckiest girl
in the world , im not going to lie yes i loved you,
and that day you asked me out & i said yes, but you played
me & laughed said im kidding , i was hurt , you couldn't even imagine
i waited weeks no months for you to ask that simple question,
the next day i couldn't even want to face you i was embarrassed no hurt
that someone i loved would do that, until you asked me again but i said
no, you said why?, and i said u stomped on my heart you knew how i felt.
of course i didnt say that out loud except for the no part , but i did say are you going to
do what you did yesterday say im kidding again, all you did was blush,
that day was a Friday , i felt you were just playing cruel mindless games that wont stop,
i loved you , and im guessing you knew that until my friend confronted you asking you,
was it true did you mean it , you said why would i lie about something like that,
that following week i asked you , you were acting like i was talking non sense until you saw how truly sad i was, than you said the most hurtful thing , ''Im sorry don't get upset but i didn't mean it'' Of course i did the opposite i cried when i went home prayed to god why? why? i loved him.. After that time faded away & we got closer you still flirted with me until our last dance you went with someone else,,, & that hurt me & you knew thats why you didn't talk to me that whole day... now summer has passed & i still haven't thought about you even once when school got closer i wondered wow im thinking about you but those feelings went away when i saw you the first day of school you smiled and that was the day i laid eyes on you.
- by xirefuse2beforgottenx |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/26/2011 |
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- Title: They day i laid eyes on you
- Artist: xirefuse2beforgottenx
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Description:
This is a true story about how i felt about this guy i loved very much , but couldn't catch him...
- Date: 09/26/2011
- Tags: love sadness lonely confused
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xirefuse2beforgottenx - 09/26/2011
- Awwwwh tthankks sooo sweet(: <3
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- larry_naruto21 - 09/26/2011
- this is very good for your first time its raw emotions and exactly how you feel sometimes when i want my readers to connect with me on an emotional level i use analogies and very descriptive words this will help your poetry get noticed and give the readers a level playing field to imagine what your going through but nonetheless very well written ^_^
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- xirefuse2beforgottenx - 09/26/2011
- Btw this is my first poem(:
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