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HIDE!! I thought. I looked around and spotted the closet. “Dang it I was so close” I muttered to my self. Then I herd Mrs Digbe say mutter “Poor girl when will she find out about how her parents died” I felt something wet streaming down my pale face. I all of a sudden it hit me that she was talking about me, about my parents. Then I felt that I was about to sob.
I felt a hand cover my mouth as i was about to sob. He leaned and whispered in my ear “shh its okay” he paused then said “Please don't cry”. I looked at the person in the corner of my eye. All of a sudden I reliesed who the person was. It was the other loner.
As soon as I herd the sound of the door closing and the squeak of the lock “no wonder I didn't reckiniseod your voice” . “Hey do you whant to be friends?” I asked. He started to giggle “Of coures” he said in burst of giggles.
- by WeirdGothicCreepyChick |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/06/2009 |
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- Title: untiled
- Artist: WeirdGothicCreepyChick
- Description: this is from a dream I had and my new book and can you comment and tell me should i keep working on it or just get rid of it. P.S this is a rough draft if you have critisesizem please be kind I am a biginer at writeing
- Date: 03/06/2009
- Tags: untiled
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Comments (3 Comments)
- br0kenwolf - 05/25/2009
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i advise you to keep on writing even if it doesnt sell youll know it was fun and later on you wont regret it ^^
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- WeirdGothicCreepyChick - 03/07/2009
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thank you
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- littlepeopleworld - 03/07/2009
- It's good. It's confusing without the other parts of the story, but I love your writing stye.
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