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I was sitting at the picnic table outside the soccor field. Iku and I just got back from P.E.
Iku asks "Akako, why do you have to switch schools anyways? You could of stayed with me you know". I sighed and took a sip from my box of juice, I replied "I already told you Iku, my mom is going places cause her work jumps from place to place this year. I'm staying with my step-dad at his academy.". Iku looked like she finally let it go and then sat down next to me. She then asked me "So what type of school is it?" I shrugged and said plainly "A boy's academy".
She stood up and her jaw dropped and she basically yelled "WHAT?!"
I think to myself 'wow this again...'. I sighed again and the told her again "He is the chairman I have to stay there. It would be different if he had house here.".
She muttered "Ohh" She had her hand to her face when she said that.
Akio dodged through the door and yelled to the class of boys "Guess what!!" Yukio and Naoko (the twins) said apathetically and in unison "What". Akio answered with a high voice of a five year old getting a big lollipop. "A girl is coming to our academy!"
Harue asked "Really?!". Akio replied "Didn't you hear what I said just now?"
Harue nodded and muttered "Didn't have to be a jerk about it."
Nagataka asked Naoko and Yukio "Did he have one of those dreams again?" They shrugged.
The door opened and came in Chairman Kimura. He announced "You probably heard from Akio's yelling that a girl is coming to our school in a few days. Well it is true. So when she comes don't make her feel uncomfortable okay?" They nodded.
~To Be Continued~
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- Title: Only One (Chapter One)
- Artist: Poisoned by Pandas
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Description:
Akako Kimura's mom has to go travel for her work. Since Akako is in public school and not in an academy where you have dorms her step-dad decided to have her come to his academy that he is chairman in. Only one thing, it's an all boy academy.
(i'll be talking in first person in the story)
Please tell me anything to improve it ^^ - Date: 01/17/2010
- Tags: onlyoneromanceshojo
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Comments (6 Comments)
- goya-chan - 06/09/2011
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why not have it like this?
"Akako, why do you have to switch schools anyways? You could of stayed with me you know". I sighed and took a sip from my box of juice.
"I already told you.."
to me, it seems to flow better. But that's just me biggrin
(sorry about that- the comment thing wouldn't let me post the whole thing lol) - Report As Spam
- goya-chan - 06/09/2011
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perhaps work on the way you introduce talking? example:
Iku asks "Akako, why do you have to switch schools anyways? You could of stayed with me you know". I sighed and took a sip from my box of juice, I replied "I already told you....." - Report As Spam
- Poisoned by Pandas - 06/12/2010
- thnx Lani
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- NamineSquareEnix - 06/08/2010
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Coooool story!!!
6/5 to bad that doesn't exist razz - Report As Spam
- Poisoned by Pandas - 01/20/2010
- thank you captain XD
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- Gray Turtle - 01/17/2010
- 5/5
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