- "ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!!!!!!!!!! Thats the sound of the monster when it is not feeding now lets move along and I'll show some more. Come along jimmy". Jimmy is a curios boy but in this story that will get the best of him. Jimmy stayed behind and looked at the monster when it came out. "Everyone misunderstands you i don't think your a monster" AAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHH! I know i'll help you escape. Jimmy grabs a vial with acid and pours it on the rails. As the acid is burning through the rails the teacher come and finds jimmy. "Jimmy get away form that monster"!!!!! The acid has gone through the rails and the monster walks to the teacher and rips his head of and eats him. Then the monster turns around and bends over and jimmy climbs on the monsters back and they go on a rampage and kill everyone in sight while jimmy is doing nothing, just sitting on the monsters back. To this day people still hear the screaming noise from the monster. Oh no here he comes now take this and run run run and don't look behind keep running!
- by xxxangel of doomxxx |
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- | Submitted on 11/29/2009 |
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- Title: the monster
- Artist: xxxangel of doomxxx
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my second story submited on gaia plz comment
- Date: 11/29/2009
- Tags: monster
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- bob199424 - 11/29/2009
- was this suppose to be like.....good? i sorry, but i had no idea what was going on, no detail what so ever, who was with jimmy, why was there a teacher, and why did the monster not even feel Jimmy on his back. I mean, it's ok if you were doing stream of concoisness writing, but that's about it...sorry.
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