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Born in hell. She will rise above all men in their search for power and strength. A woman with ability to over come all murders. Her eyes see that in which is hidden from the world. Fallen angel's will rise along with her and follow this young godess of the flames of hades.
With her hair the color of black coal. Her eyes lighted by her fathers horrific crimes. He, the devil, who will find virtue through his daughter. Where her mother, an angel of the dark herself will come together again.
She who will capture the man who's heart is closed to true love. Yet, open to all other forms of love. She will take away what is held most valuable to each and strip them of their protection. Then she will proceed to show the truth to the rulers of the human realm.
To God, his foolish and selfishness. To her father, his hate, pain, and mistrust. And to Her mother, Jonna. A vampire lady fallen in love with fate. Her evil eyes entrusted to her most dearest value. A value of the heart.
Flesh that is her flesh. Eyes that are her eyes. Looking back on her through a woman of pride and power. A queen of ice, fire, and compassion. She is the night's bird. She is the Sun's reflection. She is .... God's lover. The devil's daughter and true pure evil. Phear is life.
- by ms_Punkette |
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- | Submitted on 01/14/2009 |
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- Title: Prologue: The Tale Of Phear
- Artist: ms_Punkette
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Description:
Over dying souls one rises to escape the night. It will be she who saves this world we so selfishly covert.
- Date: 01/14/2009
- Tags: prologue tale phear
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Grimm Mivare - 01/22/2009
- Holy moly! Keep on truckin' ms_Punkette! It rocks so far. Now you need the rest of the chapters, and you're golden!
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- team_jacob_S3XI - 01/19/2009
- ...not much of a story lol. it discribes opsmeone- oh wait that was the prologue oops. i will defidently keep reading if you keep writing. finish the story!!!! it sounds good but i agree the writing wasnt all that good
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- Skadi Sundermount - 01/18/2009
- aside from being badly written its also very...dumb! At first I thought you were being metaphorical and talking about some kind of goddess like incarnation of "Fear" but as the story progressed I came to realize I was sadly mistaken and was starring at what basically amounts to a Mary Sue.
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- Setsuna Kayakawa - 01/14/2009
- holy crap, that is so wickedly well done, keep writing cuz now i really wanna read the rest
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