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Chapter 4
A couple days passed and Noah and Danielles love for each other got stonger but one night Noah woke up to the sound of crying. He slowly got up and looked around. He couldint find anyone so he closed his eyes
and fell asleep again. Again he woke up to crying. Noah got mad and stood up to have a good through out check. He started to walk around the small medow but found nothing so decided to go look near the edge of the forest.
When he came to a certain part of the forest the crieing got louder. "...h-hello?" Noah said wile walking towards the noise.
As suddenly as the crying started, it ended. Noah got to a small clearing with a rock in the middle. Somehow it looked so familiar.
Sitting on the rock was a girl. She wipped her head at Noah and started to cry even harder but she managed to say " basterd! you killed me!" she screamed " and now your falling in love with that human!" she spat. "but you can make it up to me" she wispered while getting up and walking slowly to Noah. "kill her and you can be with me forever!" She begged. Noah pulled her to him.
There lips were only inches apart when he saw something on the ground behind the big boulder. He moved away and ran to the side of the boulder. Noah dropped to the ground and picked up the unconsous girl. "dont worry... Danielles still alive. Just unconsous." The dead vampire girl grinned. "What did you do to her Sam?" Noah picked Danielle up
from the ground. "Noah sweet heart im apauled! You really think i would do suck horrable things to people. Thats your job...isnt it?" Sams grin disapeared.
"i killed you because you tried to kill me. would you rather get tortured til death or just get it over with?"
"i would rather get it over with if it wasnt my lover who killed me. But you see... now im tortured after life knowing that my love killed me!" she yelled oviously getting upset.
"im sorry that it happened but it did and you need to get past it. I did love you but now your dead. Why are you still alive enyway?"
"The girl. Shes the reason im still here in this damn earth. First i was grateful that she wished me back. But not enymore...after find ing out about the feeling you have for her.!" Sam said. She quickly lunged to Noah and grabbed Danielle."you love her more then you love me dont you?"she asked while grabbing a lond sword from her sheif."dont worrie Noah im not going to kill her! How could i do such a thing to someone who freed me? im only going to cut her up a little bit so when ever you fall more in love with her
you will know that your killing her." Sams grin came back. She put the tip of the knife on Danielles hand and carved the shape of a heart rapped with thorns. Sams eyes widend as a sharp sword spearsed her heart. "trying to kill me again? Silly Noah!" Sam said while gently laying Danielle on the ground."i cant die anymore.
the only way i can die is if she dies too. plus you didnt stop me, im done!" Sam told him while starting to disapear. "Dont leave me!" Noah yelled as he ran over to her. She stoped disapearing and looked him in the eyes."really? Do you really want me to stay?" she said before Noah bent down and kissed her passonatly."
no. i just wanted to kiss you one more time..."
"you selfish basterd!" Sam yelled "i thought you wanted me back but you just wanted to play me once more!" Sam screamed.
There was a sudden noise. Thay both looked at Danielle. Noahs eyes widend at the site of Danielle sitting up and stareing right at them. Her eyes filled with tears. Danielle quickly got up and ran into the darkness of the trees."Wait! Danielle!" Noah yelled pushing Sam away and hurried after her."Danielle! ? I can explain!"Noah yelled at Danielle even though he couldint see her
or hear her since her feet were extremely quiet for a human. She tripped a
nd fell into a puddle. Her eyes widened to the stinging in her right hand. Danielle wiped the mud off her hand and saw the cut. It was quite deep. There was going to be a scar. But no time right now. She had to get away. Danielle didnt know why but she just had to. She heard Noah not far behind her. Danielle got up and started running again but didnt get far before tripping. There were so meny roots comeing from the tall big cedar trees.
She decided to stop and sit down. She was tired and had no clue were she was. Danielle sat an a long hallow log that had numeras
branches sticking out of it. She put her head in her hands and just sat here. Her clothes were a bit dirty from all the running but nothing too bad that she couldint wash off. Danielle took her head out of her hands and turned the right one over. She brushed the dirt out of the stinging cut." im sorry Danielle" a fimilar voice said as Noah walked out of the darkness of the trees. " you really didnt need to see that..."
Danielle got up. " Well i did." She said stareing into his pale eyes and then looked away in pain when she thought about Noah kissing that girl. Her eyes filled with tears. Danielle started to run again but didnt get far before bumping into Noah. Before she could run away Noah put his arms around her and held her close. " Im sorry Danielle. you really didnt need to see that. I- i love you..." Danielles eyes widened. "uh...wha..."Danielle stutterd"i love you too"Danielle started to relax. Noah lifted his hand onto her cheak. Then leaned in to kiss her. Danielle could feel his lips brush against hers. She so bady wanted to kiss him but... . She pushed away from him. She just couldint handle it. " i... im sorry but... i cant do this" she said looking down. Danielle pealed her self away from him and walked away. Noah just stood there watching her.
to be continued...? xd
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- Title: Opitimus- chapter 4
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omg it took me like weeks but i finished it!! its chapter 4!!!!! thats right!!!. i hope you guys like it! pl read and rate!!!
oh and comment if you like it. and dont mind my sucky spelling. im sure my storys understandable... - Date: 08/20/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Devonana - 02/20/2010
- Use the spell check plz. :3
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- kittypuss123 - 08/20/2008
- btw.... i know like the name sounds like transformery but i didnt know what to name it so i looked around my house and saw my fan and it says Optimus.but i didnt want it to be like exactly the same so i got ..yeah
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