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Part 1
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There I sat, my eyes watching the clock not move. I was in biolagy as I watched him pass by. His scent filled the room, as we all stoped and stared. This only made the time go even slower. I watched carefully to where he sat, table 4, three down from mine. I looked away as quickly as I could, and ducked my head in my dark brown hair. He payed no attention. The bell, to my relief, finally rung, and I was free, the weekend ahead.
"Where are you going Rachel?" Asked Jef.
"I think I'll study, huge history thing monday. Hard. Yeah." I responded.
"Hey, well I was wondering if... umm... you wanted to do something with me.? Jeff responded.
"Thats really nice, but I really should get started studying." I said too quickly. I thought the response over in my head and said under my breathe "ya that works..."
"What?" Jeff questioned.
"Oh nothing, but I really should get going. See you around." I hoped I hadent sounded too rude, but I had to make it sharp, otherwise my secret would be out. I didn't want to make any more awkward contact so I walked away, maybe too fast. That was the end of Jeff. Nobody had seen him after that.
-To be continued-
- by iiLuv Angel |
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- | Submitted on 06/05/2009 |
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- Title: Dusk
- Artist: iiLuv Angel
- Description: This is my first writing. Please give suggestions, not too much critizism.
- Date: 06/05/2009
- Tags: dusk vampires
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Comments (4 Comments)
- inuyasha luffer - 06/12/2009
- nice job but it does remind me alot of twlight.
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- Fera_Nai - 06/09/2009
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*biology
*paid no attention
*hadn't
You might want to paste this in Word first and reread it for grammar and punctuation errors. I don't mean to be annoying, just trying to help out smile - Report As Spam
- Totetsusgff_and_L-chans - 06/05/2009
- This is awsome!!! Soo mysterious I love it better than my own work. keep writing. XD
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- xxpeacyxx - 06/05/2009
- asome mommy
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