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makumacreek
Makumacreek, a poorly grown forest inhabited only by poor, ill creatures named Makuma.
but today, things shall change.
"SEND IN OUR LOWEST RANKED KNIGHTS, WE'RE HEADING FOR MAKUMACREEK!"
payed knights are sent to murder and trash all makuma, by none other than Lady Origami
herself, an evil witch bent on killing animals to take forests for herself, already owning over
sixty-two percent of japanese forests, she still wants more.
a member of the dragon roost post office enters lady origami's hut, holding a small scroll
"i have a message from your men miss, here you go."
''thank you, return to them, i shall read this letter". lady origami opened up the small scripture
and reads:
for lady origami,
we have successfully fought of all the makuma we can see and have our camp up,
please do come over to see your new land.
and also, any chance of a promotion?.
sincerely, your lowest ranked guards.
''hmm" pondered lady origami "i have been thinking of making some new armor so i can finally
get them a promotion, since they took care of the forest."
lady origami's highest royal guard, Yamato looked at his mistress with a grin on his face
"uh, my lady, can i have a promotion too?, i mean, i've been serving you all these years without
something else to do..."
a moment of silence breaks out in the hut, then a slap is delivered from origami to yamato.
"owwee!, that hurt!"
"shut up you!, you want to get demoted to the pig sty cleaner?"
"umm, no miss origami!"
"then grab some buckwheat chips and we'll go, shall we?"
Yamato rushes to the cook and shout "yes, mam!" causing lady origami and the girls outside to laugh.
several hours later the warriors of the town arrive at their destination with five bags of buckwheat chips, rice balls and meat.
"ah, welcome lady origami, did you bring any food?"
lady origami rolls her eyes
"yes, help yourself"
"yum,delicious!".
- by xxnoodle44 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/30/2008 |
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- Title: the matosha chapter one
- Artist: xxnoodle44
- Description: the short tale of the creature known as the matosha, an angelic spirit evolving in the forest, makumacreek
- Date: 07/30/2008
- Tags: story guide
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Comments (2 Comments)
- elesha - 02/23/2009
- i dunno..an applause for effort..
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- ~OpposingDarkness~ - 07/30/2008
- While not a bad piece of writing, there a couple of things I'd like to point out. Not criticism, just thoughts! It's very samey, this kind of thing is very common. Secondly, it's not PARTICULARLY well written. Keep trying!
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