(this is written from a guy's point of view, mmmkay?)
Hayate gently stroked my cheek as we sat on a large, flat rock by the flowing creek. Nobody was within at least one mile of us, as no one knew about this spot. Only us. It's our place. He placed his hands on my cheeks and looked at me with beautiful, undescribable eyes, and leaned in close. Then, the wonderful sparkles of youth arose in my tummy. This small motion layed me on my back. My arms wrapped around his slim figure as his lips met mine. I got this warm feeling inside. The feeling that I am with the one person I love more in the world. Somehow, his hands found their way to my shirt's top button.. Then the second one.. And the rest... Where will it go next?
is it good? it's my shonen-ai story plz tell mee if i should comtinue and/or rate it! plz i need suggestions cuz i'm just a kid. (and a baka)
 Mandy Thorne · Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 11:57pm · 2 Comments |
