*cries* why god?! Why must you always find someone who has to beat me in everything! *shakes fist* lol *applauds* well done, excellent. Now from what i understand, this could be earth...but it might not, secondly, Dapon died? or is he alive? If hes supposedly "dead", how? ( i must know! *flips through empty pages* Gah! ) *falls* curse novels with cliffhangers! lol. thats a good thing though, you caught my attention, *must find cocky charcter...* ninja
now, i guess you could describe Amal a little more...all i can picture is a guy with pale blue eyes. Thats about the only flaw.
*huggles* great story! ...no great isnt good enough...AWESOME! stupendous...im running out of words. *flips through thesuaras* ...its briliant. *is determined to find out how it ends...let alone how it begins!* *steals plot and reads over it* xd *laughs evily*
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Surfer-Yves · Community Member · Wed Jan 26, 2005 @ 09:37pm
May's writing>TAI's writing. 3nodding
Don't you even try to deny it.
Wah! Cliffhanger!! MOOOOORE!! The people demand more!! (or...at least Horo and I do. whee )
I wanna know what happens!!!! *gets a brain-scan-o-tron to try to read your mind and find out the rest of the story* ninja
Yeesh....the poetry i write doesnt even compare to this...you amaze me, May...what else is in that head of yours? Keep adding to this...I want more... heart
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OnlyMikomi · Community Member · Sat Jan 29, 2005 @ 04:39am
awsome, after reading that romantic bit, i had to back-track! I love your story!!!! heartdomokundomokun
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Darion_Lunis · Community Member · Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 01:58pm