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walking down my mind to find maddness at the end of the road
maddness

I walked out the gas station...It was 2:00 am and I bought myself a pack of cigarettes..I was tired, hungry,and didn't know why I was here...I hadn't gone to sleep last night..or the night before that..I looked around.. Only one car..One man getting gas.. I looked down.. cracks...cracks in the concrete everywhere with grass growing out of it...I was a loner..I didn't like people and people didn't like me....
I shook my cigarette pack and tore off the plastic, took one out and lit it..
I walked out of sight if that gas station. Walking on the sidewalk. My house was 2 hours away on foot..i sighed.."What am i doing"? I asked myself.. in my head I thought.. I don't even know anymore..I puffed on my cigarette every time I felt like it..its 2:30 and I'm down to my third one..I walked for about an hour when suddenly a car was following me. I pretended not to notice it. I was going to pretned to change direction soon. I turned. The car speed up. I panicked and ran!
Three men ran out of the car and chased me! I kept running! Jumping fences to get a great distance between me and them..About 10 minutes later the chasing stopped..And so did I.. I found a side of a house to rest on..Panting like a dying animal...I then looked around the corner.. BAM! he hit me in the face with a wooden baseball bat..

I fell to the ground, my head bleeding..
Then the man yelled something.
I couldn't make it out..i was going unconscious..and next thing i know the other two men came and started kickeing me over and over again. They stopped and picked me up. I could hear my heart beat in my head..Everything seemed to go slower..Head still bleeding the remanding man who hit me with a baseball bat hit my leg.. It cracked and shrieked in pain. I wanted to fall to the ground but I couldn't..They were still holding me. My leg felt like it was on fire. BUM BUM.. BUM BUM... BUM BUM..My heart wouldn't stop! The man punched me in my stomach!AGAIN!AGAIN!AGAIN!Each time i spat blood!and they let me go...I fell once more on the ground...but then my back..it was on fire too!I was passing out..My eyes closed..I opened them only to see a man stab me again....
Again.......Again....and then I lost consciousness..I woke up a day later in a dumpster...It was dark....and I was dying

I trudged on the streets...even after that beating...I was in the wrong place at the wrong time...
I don't know how or why it happened , but it did.. I better get to the hospital soon , or I'll die from lose of blood. Limping down the streets, hand on the wall, 4 stab wounds , and one broken leg..still going...never to appear in the city lights....and no one was around to see me anyway...

I was crying.....every now and then I came across an alley.....I would crawl and drag myself...on and on...hand bleeding from all the broken glass..... never to be seen...





plz comment it and rate it..i think it sux....idk...im usally really good with stories like these but idk....comment plz!!(btw i dont smoke)
to many I's and ones blah blah

I MADE IT ON THE TOP OF MY HEAD BTW!
I WENT ALONG WITH IT!

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  • User Comments: [2]
    Eternal Remorse
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    Thu Nov 19, 2009 @ 01:55am


    biggrin Great Job! How did yah come up with that story?....ohh that was ruthless....and it was really excruciating......and no it doesn't suck....and actually you're a good writer though...


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    reptileluver101
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    Thu Dec 17, 2009 @ 12:47am


    I like it alot I like writing too, even though mine totally sucks. xD
    But This piece was very suspensful(=


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