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Journal of the Goddess
Being superficial gets tiring. Sometimes I like to think about more than appearances, believe it or not. :3
Writing!
I've written a lot of fun things in my creative writing class.

One of them was a mythology story. And I think I just may write a lot about it.

Now as none of my stories are completely original, see if you can draw some parallels. ;P

This is my PG-rated original I had to turn in. I may edit it to better fit what I based it off of.

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Story One: The Gods (this story featuring Ari)

There are cute people. There are handsome people. There are beautiful, pretty...or occasionally ugly people. But the finest creations of the Gods of Sexy are very sexy people, indeed.

There is a whole family of the immortal beings dedicated to the relationships between the sexes--but the rulers of this group are the God and Goddess of Sexy. They came into being when the first mortal couple's eyes met for the first time. In both the celestial and mortal worlds they are known as Ari (the Goddess, who grants sexiness to males) and Jeru (the God, who gives sexiness to females). And of course, no one can compare to their supreme sexiness.

But some arrogant mortals have tried--and it's not intelligent to anger the Gods of Sexy. One of Ari's earliest creations was called Kirei. He was the finest thing Ari had ever created or ever would create. When Kirei was first born into a peasant family, Ari descended to his home and granted him looks that made everyone who saw him fall madly in love with him. He was second only to the God of Sexy himself.

But as Kirei grew older, he grew more conceited, and one day made the fatal mistake of declaring himself the sexiest being in the universe.

He had had a wonderful life, thanks to Ari. He'd married a wealthy princess and was soon to succeed the throne, as his dying father-in-law's only heir.

But this careless remark so angered Jeru--and Ari as well, when Jeru bid her take revenge--that Ari showed up on the spot and sucked all the sexiness out of Kirei...even the sexiness he'd been born with...so that when she departed he was the ugliest thing anyone in that court had ever laid eyes on.

The princess shrieked and fainted--everyone else drove Kirei out and stoned him because his ugliness was an abomination to the earth.

Ari never created another creature as sexy as that. She knew humans could not control their vanity and often forgot gratitude for the gifts she gave them.

The End

Tell me what you think! xD

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  • User Comments: [1]
    PhilThaDJ
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    Mon Nov 03, 2008 @ 03:10am


    =o very awesome story with names i had never ran across even tho i dont read much lol umm back to what i was saying cool story is that what a creative writing class is supposed to be?=o


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