Death can also be a dance. Each knows by heart its final steps. A life immersed in pain, perhaps, Too much controlled by circumstance, Has but to turn to come to rest.
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 1:16 pm
Well I wasn't expecting THAT when I came in here. Considering the focus and concept of the piece, which was surprisingly not "death" directly, I'm pretty impressed. I mean it's not every day a poem titled "death" is any good at all. In fact, it's hardly ever. So good work.