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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:46 am


The sun

The sun has died
It drowns in the thickness of the night
The villagers were watching, as they cried
And the wise old man would recite

“The sun has died, and the moon reborn,
The cycle moves on, as we all feel torn
Life has been unkind to us all
But in time the whole world will fall

Light will lead us no more
Darkness you cannot ignore
But if people keep dreaming
Then the sun may stop drifting”
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:53 pm


nice work with the language it really painted a picture in my mind and sent through a clear message, all and all not too shabby at all


Life has been unkind to us all
But in time the whole world will fall



this part really brought up some feelings of the past, well done

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 5:26 pm


Tonia_Lee
nice work with the language it really painted a picture in my mind and sent through a clear message, all and all not too shabby at all


Life has been unkind to us all
But in time the whole world will fall



this part really brought up some feelings of the past, well done
Thx! This is one of my favorite poemes that I wrote this year!
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 8:22 pm


Very nice poem, I like it. ^_^

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