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Reply 65: Picture Palace- an Art Explosion
Rate my Art, please? <3

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Shawazu

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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:37 pm


*prays the page won't stretch*

xD I want honest, critique, please.
Anything I can improve on, or anything I should stop doing.
But I might not just, take your advice willy-nilly x3;;

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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:53 pm
i love it! 1000-3000 gold  

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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 10:36 am
I think your art stands out in a very unique way
when I see your drawing it seems as if you drew two pictures of the similar content and put them on top of each other creating some sort of double image. especially your second piece is a great example of it! so it seems like there is more in that picture or something deeper. also when you draw you should try not to go over your likes over and over and over too many times. it may make the viewers think the art is messy especially if you are planning to paint or color that pencil drawing with mutiple lines on the same place or the same outline it might make the color look dirty and you may not want that to happen (if you intended it so that the color looks more darker or down then ignore this...)
anyway overall your art is very good!!!!
I think you will be able to develope your own style some day

P.S. by the way a true artist wouldn't call their artwork "crab"
take pride of all the art work you create and leave teh judgements for the last moment. It's always possible to change and improve at anymoment while drawing or painting. don't forget to smile 4laugh  
PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 5:31 pm


My first honest-to-God critique! I'm so happy xD
Thank you!
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Shawazu

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PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:01 am
I'm not too fond of your style and the quality is a bit under my liking, but you have wonderful body and motion depictions in your art.

Keep practicing.

Regards-Drea  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 3:48 pm
A few tips...

1) Make lines SOLID by deleting any extra squiggly lines that are not part of the outline. Sktchy= not cool.

2) Erase ALL the grey smudges to make the background white.

3) Color inside the lines. If you followed #1, this will be easy.

Thanks!  

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