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Reply 44: Stairway to Poetry
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Which one you like better? Poem 1 or 2?
1 you idiot!!
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2 duh!!
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Skrew them both!!
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WWWAAA I can't choose!!
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They taste like pie!!!
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Chortleasd

PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 10:24 am


Yay!!Heres a short rock song I made evne though you can't hear it but don't mind the () where I added the instruments ^-^ It doesn't help at all really but ya know, I'm weird like that <3

I open my eyes
to see your answer
I open my mouth
but you never gave me a chance
(add drums)
You see, nothing important
You hear, nothing but yourself
Look and listen, I'm no longer there
and it took you this long to care
(add guitars)
It took you forever
and you didn't choose now
so you got never
After all those moments
of my life wasted
and it took so long
(slow down)
to figure out how hoping tasted
(speed up)
Now that I'm free
are you in captivity?
Rejecting that I'm really gone
and it took you so long
If I decided to not speak
I never would've found and
figured out what I wanted to seek
(cut out guitars)
(slow down)
So thank you,
for making my life miserable
Because it took me this long...

Heres another!!

Leave me alone and let me clear my mind out
saying those three words, I don't know what they're about
You say think about the times we spent
I say think about the times you went
You say turning my back aren't the ways to go
Well I'm sorry if you don't like it cause its the only thing I know

CHORUS-
I sit here, turned away
While you say lies about things being ok
Darkened corners staring back at me
why doesn't everyone just leave?
Thestruggle between dark and light
While you say lies abou things being alright
If only you know, whos winning this fight

Get back, I'm about to blow
I don't care about your feelings, I'm still your foe
How do I know your not another trick?
Be here forever and when I open up you just, kill me quick!
Keeping it strong,
alone and away from you, the devils whos lieing,
I belong and I know I was right all along
REPEAT CHORUS

If one day you really knew
all the things your putting me through
That time when we accidently kissed
you brought back feelings I missed
But all the time,
I still know that true happiness isn't mine
REPEAT CHORUS

Is it life I regret?
Or do you really know whats making me upset
Are you sad because I'm down,
or is it the other way around?
Its not enough,
to just think of this stuff
REPEAT CHORUS
PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:17 pm


aaaaaaah come on!! gonk

Chortleasd


BarefootInTheSnow

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:23 pm


your words cannot harm me
yourmusic cant make me cry
i wont do what you want me to
cant you see through it all
see through this mask
mask of pain and angry
tears, bitterness, and betrayl



anywho.. just a response to poem one smile
PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 2:15 am


hmmm... not bad... biggrin

you have skill in song writing... smile

good thing you also put instrument sounds in the first song... wink

kristine54

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