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Which one you like better? Poem 1 or 2? |
1 you idiot!! |
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2 duh!! |
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Skrew them both!! |
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WWWAAA I can't choose!! |
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They taste like pie!!! |
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 10:24 am
Yay!!Heres a short rock song I made evne though you can't hear it but don't mind the () where I added the instruments ^-^ It doesn't help at all really but ya know, I'm weird like that <3
I open my eyes to see your answer I open my mouth but you never gave me a chance (add drums) You see, nothing important You hear, nothing but yourself Look and listen, I'm no longer there and it took you this long to care (add guitars) It took you forever and you didn't choose now so you got never After all those moments of my life wasted and it took so long (slow down) to figure out how hoping tasted (speed up) Now that I'm free are you in captivity? Rejecting that I'm really gone and it took you so long If I decided to not speak I never would've found and figured out what I wanted to seek (cut out guitars) (slow down) So thank you, for making my life miserable Because it took me this long...
Heres another!!
Leave me alone and let me clear my mind out saying those three words, I don't know what they're about You say think about the times we spent I say think about the times you went You say turning my back aren't the ways to go Well I'm sorry if you don't like it cause its the only thing I know
CHORUS- I sit here, turned away While you say lies about things being ok Darkened corners staring back at me why doesn't everyone just leave? Thestruggle between dark and light While you say lies abou things being alright If only you know, whos winning this fight
Get back, I'm about to blow I don't care about your feelings, I'm still your foe How do I know your not another trick? Be here forever and when I open up you just, kill me quick! Keeping it strong, alone and away from you, the devils whos lieing, I belong and I know I was right all along REPEAT CHORUS
If one day you really knew all the things your putting me through That time when we accidently kissed you brought back feelings I missed But all the time, I still know that true happiness isn't mine REPEAT CHORUS
Is it life I regret? Or do you really know whats making me upset Are you sad because I'm down, or is it the other way around? Its not enough, to just think of this stuff REPEAT CHORUS
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:23 pm
your words cannot harm me yourmusic cant make me cry i wont do what you want me to cant you see through it all see through this mask mask of pain and angry tears, bitterness, and betrayl
anywho.. just a response to poem one smile
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 2:15 am
hmmm... not bad... biggrin
you have skill in song writing... smile
good thing you also put instrument sounds in the first song... wink
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