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The Price of Peace

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GabrielLeon

PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:07 pm


The Price of Peace

Quote:
Running from the blade of doom,
Escaping from the lying croon.
The gun gives a shout,
And all the children do cry out.

"He's dead, he's dead!"
They scream in fright.
With claws that rend,
And teeth that bite.

The demon lurches to and fro,
With every step a good soul goes.

Men jump forward,
but all do die.
Though they killed the beast,
what was the price?

Why must the good die,
with no reason at all?
There is a reason:
To save us all.


A quick little thigum I just came up with.
What do ya think?

Oh, and I'm new to the guild. :3
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:19 pm


Oh very good! I love the ending.

Spiral Vibe


GabrielLeon

PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:41 pm


Thank you. 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:08 am


I like it, it's good!

~Fritz

FritzLloyd


GabrielLeon

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:13 pm


FritzLloyd
I like it, it's good!

~Fritz

And thank you too. ^^
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:16 pm


My thoughts exactly!! lol it was aweosme =^-^=

Chortleasd


GabrielLeon

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:02 pm


I feel so special, everybody likes my poem. biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:22 pm


lol you are special xD

Chortleasd


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:35 am


This is an extrordinary poem! I was shocked when I read this. You have a great imagination. smile I love your poem...tell me what you think of mine...I have more serious ones, but I'm not posting those yet. smile I will soon though.
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