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 Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:36 pm
This is my little corner of the sob-forum. I'm gonna post some of my poems and smaller proses. I'd like feedback so tell me what you think.
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:40 pm
This little poem is one out of three I had to write for Eng H 2. We had eight minuets to write each poem so if don't like it, I won't be offened.
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#1
Overworked
Menstration
The aftermath of creation
An impossible war with your ovaries
Unthinkably hellish
Internal pain
Raise cramps
Raise hell
"Thanks, Eve."
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:41 pm
This is the second poem out of three I had to write for Eng H 2. Enjoy.
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#2
Nintendo
Rival cars
Rival women
Rival eachother
Come together at the joystick
Hug the colored-buttons
Cry over lost points
Eagerly taking cheats
Manhood on the line
Touching and grasphing the final life
Don't let go
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:52 pm
This is the third poem out of three I had to write for Eng H 2. Hope you like it.
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#3
January Hangover
Awaken the magic
Inspiration at last
No more sleepless nights scarificed
Born a simple love
Now complicated
Madness taking over
Impossibly comforting
Nothing lost nor gained
Secrets are left open
Visions now are true
Just the desire is left
To be with you
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