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 Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:48 am
Slowly, into the darkened room I step
Soft candle light illuminating your presence.
I can feel you long before we touch.
As my fingers trail along the bed,
my eyes fall to the petals on the sheets.
My love, you are the only man for me.
Shivering, I feel your fingers touch my sides
as my eyes close..
Your warm breath excites my soul.
As my own tips touch yours against my sides,
we are one.
Slowly you wander the curves and hollows of my body.
Tempting to send me over the edge.
As our clothes fall to the floor you become my lord.
Perfect in every way.
My tongue and lips touch your body in homage to you.
as I feel your pulse quicken.
Our lips meet in unison as the passion rises.
I lay now in a pool of roses,
My own flower cared for as tenderly as those around me.
I arch and cry out.
Long have I awaited this moment.
Your hands trail over me
My eyes close slowly as I live in this moment.
Comming to me my longings are fulfilled.
I cry out as I feel you complete me,
Our bodies and lips press together as one.
and I am in heaven.
You become in one loving night
My love... and My Passion
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 2:18 pm
If this poem had been just a little more graphic I would have had to ban it. As it is, I have changed the steamier parts to read in WHITE so if you are a little kid don't read the blotted out parts kiddies!
Yes, this is me protecting my butt.
The poem was well written though
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:55 pm
yea that is a bit graphic o.O
has a romantic feel to it though.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 12:27 am
That is a beautiful poem, amazingly written, too. Wonderful wording, I especially like the part about the flowers being cared about *cough cough* yes, that was very well thought out.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:57 pm
I like it alot ^.^ plz PM me with another one of your works if you do indeed write some more.
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