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 Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:01 pm
I'm not sure if this is supposed to be in the Advice place or the Creative Endeavors place...I'm not sure at all...
One of my friend's best friends died of a cancer...I tried to cheer her up...I tried to make her stop crying...I know how it feels...so I just left her alone to cry her head off. I do care, but I don't feel like caring anymore. I wrote a poem, and I just...I don't know...wanted at least someone to look at it. And put it in a place she can't look at...
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Don't tell me I don't know what love and death is.
Go ahead and cry and tell me I don't get it
Go cut yourself, I don't know hell about this
I don't want to put up with this, I'd rather get hit
I don't get what you want, death is just another stage.
You've known him forever, I get that part
But you've got to move on, turn the next page
He's close to you, close to your heart
I know this already, I've experianced it, move on, girl.
It's hard, I know that already, even if you say I don't.
I don't know him very well, yeah, stop complaining, you're making me hurl.
I won't talk to you, I won't
You're making me frusterated; I'll mind my own business
But I wish you'd get the point already, stop with the lectures
Go cry yourself to sleep, I couldn't care less
I understand you say you care about him, but the way you act, I think you couldn't care less.
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:07 pm
Well my guess would it could be in the advice colomn but lets see were else it could be put...
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:46 pm
I'm really sorry to hear that... great poem though... I can feel the strength and emotion in it. *Gives you a hug*
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:50 pm
Actually not too long ago I wrote a letter to my mother-in-law-to-be that was very angry, and I hid it in my fiance's dresser. Turns out she searched the dresser at one point, found it, and read it and then she wouldn't let me back in the house...
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 12:48 am
i'm sorry to hear about your friend, and that poem is beautiful. maybe you should just give your friend time by herself... i know myself, when i'm grieving i hate other people trying to sympathise because it sets me off crying again! i'm sure sooner or later your friend will realise just how helpful and supportive you were trying to be
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 8:00 am
I am Sorry to hera about your friend.
Good poem.
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