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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 8:30 am
This is where people can post there original lyrics and music. Aspiring writers and musicians can come here to ask opinions of others.
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 12:30 am
CMI and I wrote this for our band, Drowning Ladybugs. Its not great, but we like it.
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=35577616
Musical (?) Intro
Verse I He doesn't care for polka dots, and he doesnt like to dance. I've never seen him in crazy stripes, or big and pockety pants. He's not as crazy as I am, Though he gives me a good run. For all the things he isn't he makes up for it with just one.
Chorus Out of all the polka-dotted, pockety pants wearing, crazy stripe loving,* boys who love to dance.
Verse II Who'd have thought I'd want the one who walks around in a red sheet with a big "S" on his chest and no fear of feeling pain. He is always honest, just not as brutally as I. but he'll make you laugh, no doubt and take you with him when he flies. He's not perfect, i admit and he's not always there but he's better than I'd ask for better than your average bear.
Chorus Out of all the polka-dotted, Coolio pants wearing, crazy striped fiends, and boys who love to dance.
Verse III Who'd have guessed I'd want the one who walks around in faded jeans with comical baggy shirts and a superhero stance. He's not what I expected He's not what I explain I dont think i'll understand but I know I won't complain.
Verse IV/Outro i know you dont wear polka dots or those big pocket-pants i know you dont wear crazy stripes and that you can hardly dance but I'll sit on a Rubix cube and i wont say its strange because if you'll be my Superman I'll be your Lois Lane
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 12:09 pm
First song for my band, Steel Sky.
*Musical Intro*
Stairs of Life, he's falling up. Stairs of Life, he's falling up. Stairs of Life, he's falling up. And he won't stop 'til he reaches the ...Top!
And he's petrified What his soul'l become When he reaches the top, 'Cause he just can't ...Stop!
Rocketing towards Heaven's Gates, He tries to forget all the things he hates. And remembers the good times he had. Forgets his Mom and forgets his ...Dad!
Memories from his childhood. Friends helped him out every chance they could. He made bad decisions and just couldn't stop. Now he's headed straight to the ...Top!
Stairs of Life, he's falling up. Stairs of Life, he's falling up. Stairs of Life, he's falling up. And he won't stop 'til he reaches the ...Top!
*Musical Outro*
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:57 am
those kick a**! I need to get some mucis up here from my old band. blaugh heart
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Teh Domo is no longer sex
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 7:13 am
You love me in the worst way and you know i like that best. when you're acting normal i can't help but get depressed. While other girls, they hug me and they send me on my way. You push me over, pin me down and MAKE MY DAY!
I can't help but love your hate} I get hard when you're irate } REFRAIN beat me blue, i love you too, } love me harder i say to you. }
You've tied up both my arms and legs i'm crawling on the floor. i'm squirming like a catterpillar heading for the door. a smile is on my face now, i've ad a happy day i thank you for your services and head out on my way.
EVERYONE SING ALONG!
I CAN'T HELP BUT LOVE YOUR HATE! I GET HARD WHEN YOU'RE IRATE! AND THOUGH AS STRANGE AS THIS MAY SOUND, KINKY SEX MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND! end.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 6:13 pm
so.....
i'm that bad, huh?
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 8:02 pm
you think you know me but i know you don't you think i'll need you but i know i won't information is what you need you'll sacrifice your life for me
CHORUS: out there somewhere i will stand in amreica, australia or japan wherever you search you'll never know where i am
you try to impress me but it won't work you follow me around it makes me think of you as a jerk giving me presents everyday the big surprise in may
CHORUS:
can't you be like everyone else can't you leave me alone like everyone else can't you can't you
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 8:05 pm
~m!sS_pUnk!i~ you think you know me but i know you don't you think i'll need you but i know i won't information is what you need you'll sacrifice your life for me CHORUS: out there somewhere i will stand in amreica, australia or japan wherever you search you'll never know where i am you try to impress me but it won't work you follow me around it makes me think of you as a jerk giving me presents everyday the big surprise in may CHORUS: can't you be like everyone else can't you leave me alone like everyone else can't you can't you CHORUS: is this song really bad?? i'm only 10 so really, is it that bad?
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 8:18 am
"When I'm Gone" [Introduction] Yeah... It's my life... My own words I guess...
[Verse 1] Have you ever loved someone so much, you'd give an arm for? Not the expression, no, literally give an arm for? When they know they're your heart And you know you were their armour And you will destroy anyone who would try to harm 'em But what happens when karma, turns right around and bites you? And everything you stand for, turns on you, despite you? What happens when you become the main source of a pain? "Daddy look what I made", Dad's gotta go catch a plane "Daddy where's Mommy? I can't find Mommy where is she?" I don't know go play Hailie, baby, your Daddy's busy Daddy's writing this song, this song ain't gonna write itself I'll give you one underdog then you gotta swing by yourself Then turn right around on that song and tell her you love her And put hands on her mother, who's a spitting image of her That's Slim Shady, yeah baby, Slim Shady's crazy Shady made me, but tonight Shady's rocka-by-baby...
[Chorus] And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain Just smile back And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain Just smile back...
[Verse 2] I keep having this dream, I'm pushin' Hailie on the swing She keeps screaming, she don't want me to sing "You're making Mommy cry, why? Why is Mommy crying?" Baby, Daddy ain't leaving no more, "Daddy you're lying "You always say that, you always say this is the last time "But you ain't leaving no more, Daddy you're mine" She's piling boxes in front of the door trying to block it "Daddy please, Daddy don't leave, Daddy - no stop it!" Goes in her pocket, pulls out a tiny necklace locket It's got a picture, "this'll keep you safe Daddy, take it withcha'" I look up, it's just me standing in the mirror These ********' walls must be talking, cuz man I can hear 'em They're saying "You've got one more chance to do right" - and it's tonight Now go out there and show that you love 'em before it's too late And just as I go to walk out of my bedroom door It's turns to a stage, they're gone, and this spotlight is on And I'm singing...
[Chorus] And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain Just smile back And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain Just smile back...
[Verse 3] Sixty thousand people, all jumping out their seat The curtain closes, they're throwing roses at my feet I take a bow and thank you all for coming out They're screaming so loud, I take one last look at the crowd I glance down, I don't believe what I'm seeing "Daddy it's me, help Mommy, her wrists are bleeding," But baby we're in Sweden, how did you get to Sweden? "I followed you Daddy, you told me that you weren't leavin' "You lied to me Dad, and now you make Mommy sad "And I bought you this coin, it says 'Number One Dad' "That's all I wanted, I just want to give you this coin "I get the point - fine, me and Mommy are gone" But baby wait, "it's too late Dad, you made the choice "Now go up there and show 'em that you love 'em more than us" That's what they want, they want you Marshall, they keep.. screamin' your name It's no wonder you can't go to sleep, just take another pill Yeah, I bet you you will. You rap about it, yeah, word, k-keep it real I hear applause, all this time I couldn't see How could it be, that the curtain is closing on me I turn around, find a gun on the ground, c**k it Put it to my brain and scream "die Shady" and pop it The sky darkens, my life flashes, the plane that I was supposed to be on crashes and burns to ashes That's when I wake up, alarm clock's ringin', there's birds singin' It's Spring and Hailie's outside swinging, I walk right up to Kim and kiss her Tell her I miss her, Hailie just smiles and winks at her little sister Almost as if to say..
[Chorus/Outro] And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain Just smile back And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain Just smile back...
[Curtains closing and sounds of footsteps]
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