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I Tell You These Things

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Chortleasd

PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:48 am
Hello everybody! I felt like writing something and I made this up as I went along,hopes you like it! Its supposed to be a fast song ^^




I tell you,
I'm suffering
Love is medicine
but I'm not recovering
I tell you,
these risks
Hearts are CD's
but I've broken my disk
I tell you,
I'll always be here
Life is in presence
but I guess I'm going to disappear
I tell you these things
but no one is hearing
I tell you these things
but I'm lost in the clearing
I don't whats with speaking up
if no one takes it to themself
I guess I'll be taking matters to myself
Don't dare call me selfish
Cause I don't care whats the day
I don't think twice about the world
cause the world don't care what I say
They tell you the heartbreak,the loss and the scares
but no matter the good things people do
its not like the world actually cares
I tell you these things
how we need to change
but no matter how I touch you
I'll always be out of range
I tell you,I say
I try my best okay?
I tell you these things
I tell you
do I need to spell for you?
These things need,these things want
And I try to help them
You need to try too
get these things to change  
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:22 pm
Karinja-chan

...
Hearts are CD's
but I've broken my disk
...


Can I just say that I adore that! Do you mind if I use that for a quote for an icon on livejournal? I'll credit you of course  

Enraptured By The Sky


Chortleasd

PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:07 am
Oh cool,sure <3 Yay they love me they really love me!!lol
 
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 1:19 pm
Karinja-chan
Oh cool,sure <3 Yay they love me they really love me!!lol

Yes dahling we'ms do! ^.^  

Enraptured By The Sky


Viese Servatika

PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:18 pm
Karinja-chan
I tell you,
I'm suffering
Love is medicine
but I'm not recovering


That line just ... wow. I don't know. I just love that line. It speaks to me. Love the poem!!! 3nodding  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:23 am
User ImageYou're not alone
Together we stand
I'll be by your side
You know I'll take your hand
When it gets cold
And it feels like the end
There's no place to go
You know I won't give in



yay ^-^ I didn't know it was that good!! 4laugh


User ImageSo far away
I wish you were here
Before it's too late
This could all disappear
Before the doors close
And it comes to an end
With you by my side
I will fight and defend

 

Chortleasd


Enraptured By The Sky

PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 6:39 pm
*Points at your siggy* OH MAH GAWD!!! FRED FRED BURGER!!!!!! *glomps* You are made of gods you are. xp  
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 8:48 am
yay!!<3!! Fref will be perizedent!!
 

Chortleasd


Ronin Samura

PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:36 pm
wow its mezmerizing!  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 2:35 pm
@_@......Seriously?! xD
 

Chortleasd


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 11:18 am
Quote:
I tell you,
I'm suffering
Love is medicine
but I'm not recovering
I tell you,
these risks
Hearts are CD's
but I've broken my disk


These whole stanza is very touching. I know how this feels...I actually got teary crying eyed when I read that... heart _ heart Excellent poem!  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 3:27 pm
zomg!! I'm so serious, I didn't know it was that good!!!Thank you thank you!!! <3....huh....maybe you guys'll like my next one then!!
 

Chortleasd

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