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Reply 44: Stairway to Poetry
Arrival

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Giglioronamonacon

PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 1:36 am


Okay this is from when I was 13 (now 21) and as you can tell I
1. Thought I could write
2. Wanted to appear 'Goth'



Arrival

Disturbed images running through my mind
Eyes cry blood, Wounds drip tears

Why am I the only one here?

Dark wind blows through dead trees, Trees of the dead
Dead man hangs, hollow eyes follow

Where am I?

Lake of fire burns dark, lost souls swim
Flash of Silver, Unholy cross swings, pendulum of a damned clock

What is this?

Eyes in the darkness, glint of black, Wings flap
Ravens beak bloodied with the eye of knowledge
Eyes search.

Why Me?

Alocer waits here for me, his red eyes smoulder, he beckons with dark suggestion

I am home.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 2:50 pm


Hmmm...it was ok,I liked the first-half better ^^...Man is everyone older than me?! -_-'''

Chortleasd


Viese Servatika

PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 11:38 pm


Awesome. I love the imagery.
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