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44: Stairway to Poetry

I'm Just Me...

Sharima

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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:28 pm

Im Just Me

If you expect me to be perfect,
Too bad.

If you expect me to be someone im not,
Too bad.

If you expect me to do something extreme,
Too bad.

If you expect me to always make good choices,
Too bad.

If you expect me to say something rude to someone,
Too bad.

If you expect me to lie,
Too bad.

If you expect me to live,
Let me be,

Im just human,
Im just me!

- Shelley -

Feb.12, 2005

Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:59 am

I like this a lot, the style is very simple yet the meaning is very powerful!

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Sikorka

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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 2:58 am

I like this poem, it's simple and says alot in a simple way 3nodding Great job!

Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:49 pm

im_is_a_zombie

I like this a lot, the style is very simple yet the meaning is very powerful!

I completely agree. Sometimes the most simple of forms communicate the most powerful of messages (you can tell I study English Literature can't you?), and you've totally done this here.

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faerie_ophelia

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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:24 pm

Very up-front about what you're saying, which is good. Like it a lot.

Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:49 pm

Looooooooved its!! xD So simple and so...so...uhhh I can't figure out a word for it so i'll get back to you later

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Sharima

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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:23 am

Aww, thank you everyone!!! smile Do you guys have any poems you would like me to read? Or any stories? Anything. smile Thanks so much - that made my day!

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