Extended Metaphor Poem.

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I made this for my English class. I just want to know what other people think of it. >.> Let me know if I you think I can make it better.

Frost Bite

Love is like winter
The warmth form summer fades
Unprepared for something
That was coming all along

Love is like winter
When the ground freezes
Covered by bottomless layers of snow
And places of compassion are scarce and hard to uncover

Love is like winter
Each step forward takes you two steps back
Sliding down an icy hill
With no one to help you reach the summit

Love is like winter
The widest open spaces can feel isolating
When barren trees surround you
And everything outside your mind is forgotten

Love is like winter
Mountains of snow and ice turn to puddles
The constant chills fade
And the sky clears to make space for another summer.  

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ninja  

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ninja