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 Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:20 pm
Yays my turn ;D I got two more but I'll just put this one up!! heart
To exchange hearts was my only goal
And you gave it back and it wasn’t even whole
Broken pieces
my breathing ceases
Now I can’t feel anything at all.
Open my eyes and see through
Stop my cries and convince me to believe you
It never stops
My temperature drops
Now I can’t feel anything at all.
Close the door that keeps me contained
It won’t open so I stay here in shame, retained
The world slowly goes
And the rest I guess you know
Now I can’t feel anything at all.
How can you live knowing what you did day after day
How can I live falling, living at all this way?
Forgetting the point and anything
Forgetting the meaning in anything
Now I can’t feel anything at all.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:01 am
Its very expressive; I love it! I rate it a 15/10!
Confusion
Rage
Delusion
Cage
Illusion
Hate Unspoken
Light No More
Sleep None Ending
Life Ever Fleeting
My Fate is Beginning
Soul Slowly Disappearing
Death's Lasting Kiss
Consciousness Depleating
Mother's Love is Amiss
Sweet Dreams & Good Night
Father's Heart Was A Wish
Only Wanting One Last Chance Of Flight
No Earthly Vehicle Needed
No These Wings Will Be Enough
Infant to Angel I Think Not
Infant to Human More Likely
Not So Perfect & Innocent
No One Is
Open Thine Eyes
Pluck Thine Knives from My Heart
And Breath In Dusks Sweet Beauty
Leave Me, Leave Me
Death's Light Approaches
Slumber Sweetly
Dreaming No Dreams
Only Sleep
Sleep Alone With Its Gentle Touch
Illusion
Cage
Delusion
Rage
Confusion
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 2:28 pm
omg, big, rhyming words that flow so nicely AND a bonus, it tells the truth about things!!! <3 heart heart Hearts and skittles to you!! heart heart
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2007 9:30 am
10/10 the last poem...
Betrayed by love...
We had the same goals,
We had the same fears,
We shed the same blood,
We shed the same tears,
Together in life,
Together in death,
But in the end,
you took my last breath...
^^Hopes you like it...
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2007 5:04 pm
lol love the siggy AND the poem!!
Grrrr!! I loves the poem sho much... crying ...its so...so..truthful...and so simple..and so...kool!!
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:53 am
9/10 This was really strong! heart heart heart
This isn't that good but hereitgoes sweatdrop
You're tricking me
You're hurting me!
You make me think
You hold my hand,
When in reality
You're twisting my arm
You're killing me!
You make me think
You kiss my lips,
When in reality
You feed me venom
You're inprisoning me!
You make me think
You protect me,
When in reality
You lock me up
You're hurting me!
You make me think
You hold my hand,
When in reality
You break my wings
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 3:42 pm
Sweet, I actually got it! 8/10
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 10:47 pm
Karinja-chan Sweet, I actually got it! 8/10
Thanks 4laugh
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 12:18 pm
Here's another one of mine...
Théâtre des yeux
I'm patient, I can wait
I thrive in the shadow of your indecision
I'll always be there in the background
Slowly clouding over your vision.
You're weak, I can sense it
I picked you out for a reason
Your beauty shines like the blade of a knife
And you're as predictable as the seasons.
I'm hungry for my revenge
I'm waiting to hear you scream
I'm watching for the moment
That you fall apart at the seams.
I'm breaking all your defences
I'm tearing into your trust
I'm ripping away your common sense
And replacing it with lust.
I'm patient, I can wait
I've got an eternity to kill
I'll always be here in the background
Now that you have become my thrill.
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:47 pm
WOot!! Loved it!! 10/10 <3
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:47 pm
Beyond the tainted red rose
(Sorry guys i havent worte poetry in a while.))
When we see the red rose we know only one thing. Death and love of the ones we seek. The ones we touch. And the one we speak with our truth and everlasting lies. Are we the seeker of the red rose, or the givers who give it to the ones who crys with the black tears of god? I see the Rose standing high with the things that god have gave us. but the 7 sins can taint the rose. Each of them cause us to lose our heart and love ones. It can make us belive in a false beliver who tells people that he is the messager of god. The rose of Black so that the cold hearts love. Only the darkness can maek those the ones who love the dark ember rose of dark fire.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:25 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:13 pm
Xmask (since its the only poem before me) 8/10 ^-^
*claps* Good job!
Alright here I go!
Pieces of what I once was
Fragile, torn in my hands
One piece dry, the other wet
With newly shed tears
Gazing into past life
Both joy and pain revived
By the face of captured beauty
Drawing hate from its origin
Torn now with hopes to forget
But even after its destruction
The image still haunts me
Forever carved into memory
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 4:13 pm
that was a great poem 9.5, sorry for any grammar mistakes
~ Mannequin ~
You follow his trail.
You stalk his steps.
In the line of sight you freeze.
Your pale complexion and blue eyes,
Black hair and frowning smile,
Complement your perfect body.
His black hair, it covers his eyes, but he sees you.
He cries, as a river of black streams down his face.
As you began to move, you gracefully begin to dance.
He stands there, still, in a black suit and tie, as you swirl and twirl around him.
You turn and stop and freeze.
He slowly walks toward you slowly; pulling something out of his jacket.
Its a rose, half red, half black.
You still frozen; he puts it in your hand and pricks his thumb.
With his thumb he makes the outline of a heart, on your heart, but doesn't fill it.
He now leans over to put his black lips on yours; then pulls out a mirror.
You move to see your face, but all u see is you standing straight.
Surprised, you begin to move back; but he kisses you again and walks away.
Your skin turns to plaster and you stand straight.
Crimson tears run down your face, as you stand lifeless as he walks away.
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