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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 9:15 am
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Remember to use quotes for words and nothing for actions, write your roleplaying like you're writing a short story for school.
Example: Dark walked into the town and killed everybody in sight. He licked his blade, the blood tasted better because itwas not his own. There were some people still alive that he couldn't see before. They had witnessed the entire slaughtering, he turned to face them, "Oh, hi." He said as he continued to lick the bloody blade.
Okay, try to roleplay with sense, when you say he killed everybody in sight, and then have him say "Hi" it just doesn't work. Who was he saying "hi" to? Try to give as much possible information about what is happening. Also, make sure you explain everything, and use quotes for speaking and nothing for actions.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 11:57 pm
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Typyro Remember to use quotes for words and nothing for actions, write your roleplaying like you're writing a short story for school.Example: Dark walked into the town and killed everybody in sight. He licked his blade, the blood tasted better because itwas not his own. There were some people still alive that he couldn't see before. They had witnessed the entire slaughtering, he turned to face them, "Oh, hi." He said as he continued to lick the bloody blade. Okay, try to roleplay with sense, when you say he killed everybody in sight, and then have him say "Hi" it just doesn't work. Who was he saying "hi" to? Try to give as much possible information about what is happening. Also, make sure you explain everything, and use quotes for speaking and nothing for actions.
well abt the people still alive part i don't quite like because i was hoping for my character to get into fight
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:18 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:34 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:56 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:39 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 8:59 am
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 2:29 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:30 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 4:27 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 7:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 5:03 pm
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 6:08 am
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