I am posting any missions that I do and thier grades for future mission reference.

A little Firestarter

Objective: - Find the fiery little Vulpix and make it out of the mansion alive. (Complete)

Pokémon used: Charmander
Pokémon defeated: Vulpix
Pokémon caught: Vulpix

(Source: Mission Locker, Wild Pokémon Hunts.)

Klonoa was the one who took mail for Tails and Miles. After he finished reading, he took off his hat to scratch his head.

I suppose it is.

Now, I'll tell you this up front. I'm poorly suited for mission grading because instead of grading, I constantly critique, and I tend to be really harsh. I don't mean anything by it; I've just been doing things for a really long time.

Now, I know you have a good writing style for a beginner, but the mission itself was very bare-bones. Where you had an opportunity to expand on things, you didn't take it. There were also contradictions. At one time, you made it seem as if Charmander would fry if it touched the floor. When it approached the Vulpix, it did so with very little trouble at all. Now, this brings me to another point. The RP world's physics works very differently from the games. Heat wouldn't really bother a Charmander at all, and it could easily shrug off walking through fire. And Vulpix, with its Flash Fire ability, actually thrives in fire and can easily withstand lava temperatures.

And take into consideration the history of that old mansion. In the games it was alluded as a place where Mewtwo was created. Maybe something unexpected might have happened in that vein. Or maybe the house could have collapsed while you were still inside, and you could have gone into better detail how the smoke bothered the character's lungs, how tired the heat made her. Show it, don't just say it within the narration.

And another important thing: paragraphs. How a mission looks is very psychological, and a wall of text like that is really hard to read because it can make a reader lose track of where he is, or make him feel as if he's making no progress.

Now remember, if anyone else were to grade this, it'd pass and perhaps not much would be said. It still passes, but keep in mind my advice the next time you write a mission, okay?

I send this with the 2000 Pokedollars the poster sent, and he also gave you five Rawst berries. He says you looked a little burnt when he saw you go.

Good luck in your next mission!

He sealed the letter in an envelope, put it in a carton with the rewards, and sent his Solrock to whisk it off to Miyuki's room.