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 Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 3:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 3:13 pm
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Moon Lily Wolf Why does death have to come and blindsight you? Hit you so quickly you don't even know what to do. Does your life flash before your eyes. Come with all the suprise that you'll be on the this earth that one last time. It's almost like after you full fill you purpose, your gone. Like the world is a game and your only one poun. In this big whole game of life. It's like were all being played in the hands of christ. Someone who just deicieds if you die or not, even if you tried even if you fought. Is it true that you only got one shot. Is it true that things really happen for a reson, or is someone tring to keep the light for some thing to belive in.~Kiki~ Camryan 2001-2006 "R.I.P Little Angel"
I was really touched by your poem crying I give it a 10
Here is one i just wrote
I'm sitting here writing you today
in march not the month of may
the sun is out
but i am in
I feel good
i have my friends
most I do not know your face
I meet you in cyberspace
I sit here typing trying to spell
the sent of roses come threw my window with there seductive smell
I try to think of wit to say
I'm in a very good mood today
am i a poet myself i cannot judge
Very stubborn person
my opinions cant be budged
Yes i am determined in every way
my own worst enemy myself
i try to love me
A gimps inside of me
you can see me
like no other
i show you through poetry
I love you all for your different views
I look to you for my daily news
about your lives i listen and learn
to share it with you
i deeply yearn. |
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:44 pm
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^ Your poem seems a little disjointed, but it sounds good 6/10
Here's mine:
A Lifetime of Longing
Welcome to a lifetime of longing. May we take your name?
We have so many others like you who’ve earned this shame.
Please, take a seat; an old flame will be with you in a moment
Just to show you how much you’ve lost and exacerbate your torment.
Let us take your coat, and introduce you to the one of your dreams
The one who wouldn’t look twice at you though your heart gleams.
Would you like something to eat? Or drink, to drown your sorrow
Though you keep a spark of hope alive through the day after tomorrow.
Make yourself at home, just make sure no one falls for you now
We want you to be unlucky in love as much as we can allow.
Keep dwelling on your dreams, my dear, of the ones you’ve loved and lost
The ones you wished loved you, the names on your heart embossed.
And so concludes my speech. Now, new friend, a toast
To a lifetime of longing, to the ones you miss the most.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:39 am
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:48 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:57 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:35 pm
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Thank you,wow,that one was kinda old,anyway heres another I made up today on the bus lol xD
Knowing my loss is your gain
those same thoughts making me insane
The memories slowly calling
and my senses slowly falling
Slowly shifting,slowly drifting
Quietly,ever so silently
The phantoms,shadows,and paranoia
Why do I feel this way today?
I always have to come with a prepared,good lie to say
Maybe its you and not me
Quietly,ever so silently
its not real and I'm just crazy
Too scared to look up or maybe lazy
If I reach out and theres nothing here
If it was or wasn't I'd just confirm my fears
My mind blowing
and my over-active imagionation growing
I don't need anymore lonliness
I can't see through this blindness
For the sake of sanity
don't throw anymore lies at me
For the wake of my heart
If you actaually wanted to help me,
stop me tears to start
But when its broken it can't be fixed
like a long-lost past it can't be stitched
It'll never be the same
and its turning into a game
Quietly,ever so silently
The thoughts of remembering,
the memories are coming
Quietly,ever so silently
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:31 pm
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Karinja-chan Thank you,wow,that one was kinda old,anyway heres another I made up today on the bus lol xD Knowing my loss is your gain
those same thoughts making me insane
The memories slowly calling
and my senses slowly falling
Slowly shifting,slowly drifting
Quietly,ever so silently
The phantoms,shadows,and paranoia
Why do I feel this way today?
I always have to come with a prepared,good lie to say
Maybe its you and not me
Quietly,ever so silently
its not real and I'm just crazy
Too scared to look up or maybe lazy
If I reach out and theres nothing here
If it was or wasn't I'd just confirm my fears
My mind blowing
and my over-active imagionation growing
I don't need anymore lonliness
I can't see through this blindness
For the sake of sanity
don't throw anymore lies at me
For the wake of my heart
If you actaually wanted to help me,
stop me tears to start
But when its broken it can't be fixed
like a long-lost past it can't be stitched
It'll never be the same
and its turning into a game
Quietly,ever so silently
The thoughts of remembering,
the memories are coming
Quietly,ever so silently
heart the poem cry It touched me 10/10
And now It's my turn again :
She is the one I always saw
but never paid attention
When she asked me something
I never gave reaction
But when I became blind
someone took care of me
guided me to everything
because I could not see
Just like I could not see before
That whatever you may show or hide
Real beauty ..
Real beauty lies inside |
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 4:31 pm
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Loooooooooved it!! heart So simple and yet it has a strong meaning,don't get those too often!!Wish they had a emoticon with a #1 sign jumping up and down...anyway finally someone posted!Meh turn!!Wrote it about a month ago...Kinda random but ya know,its gets to the point
Out lifetime is a bubble
it may seem crazy
But listen,don't give me any trouble
Some of us never make it out,
some of us come out with complications
Some of us out blown about,
some of us blwon on high winds of high sensations
Never is it really fair,
what kind of life we share
and sometimes no one really cares
Some bubbles blow far,
but don't live long enough to know whats really out there
Some stay,
and others drift away
Some go rock bottom,
taste failure,
and others forget or never thought about them
Is it really fair?
That I die sooner by accident, and cause others to pop as well?
Is it really alright?
That my life was turned into a living hell?
Chased away by a stray,
and it was your last day?
You want to keep going and touch the sun?
But not even a zillionth near your already done?
Life proves its too short,
what seems like a bubble,
life is our only resort,
before it gives us out last troubles
Its a wind,not matter what you do,
you'll be blown away even if you didn't deserve it and wasn't meant to
Times foes by,its all a short lie,
it overtime doubles like bubbles even if you seem to fly...
To fly,your wind,
can't be overcome or bend
you can't escape,
becuase every second you get closer to the end
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:47 pm
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Kirinkinetic Telepathetic
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:16 pm
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Heres one I wrote this morning
'FIRE'
I see a firecracker,
cracking and crumbling
I see burning flames,
turning and tumbling
I see an explosion,
blowing and bursting
I see the night,
darkening and dstroying
See the,rage of fire
Destined,to glow even higher
Fire,curses of the sky
Water,blessings that fly
Why not,create them both?
One to vanquish,one to roast?
I see a candle,
unlite and unattracting
I see a controlled burn,
wanting freedom and enlightening
I see a pop,
steady and startling
I see dawn,
still darkening and still destroying
See the,heat of anger
Touch the,source of danger
Burn,enflame
Turn away and dstroy the shame
I see,
I see,
I see the sun
Shining down too much on me
Its burden is a ton
Notice how you make burn from burden
and remember how the flames are still turnin'
B-U-R-N
Firecrackers,flames,explosions,and night
B-U-R-N
Candles,pops,and dawn
I see,
I see,
I've seen it all
Flames standing tall
and the burned fall
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 9:24 am
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Kirinkinetic Telepathetic
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 10:17 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:13 pm
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Karinja-chan Heres one I wrote this morning
'FIRE'
I see a firecracker,
cracking and crumbling
I see burning flames,
turning and tumbling
I see an explosion,
blowing and bursting
I see the night,
darkening and dstroying
See the,rage of fire
Destined,to glow even higher
Fire,curses of the sky
Water,blessings that fly
Why not,create them both?
One to vanquish,one to roast?
I see a candle,
unlite and unattracting
I see a controlled burn,
wanting freedom and enlightening
I see a pop,
steady and startling
I see dawn,
still darkening and still destroying
See the,heat of anger
Touch the,source of danger
Burn,enflame
Turn away and dstroy the shame
I see,
I see,
I see the sun
Shining down too much on me
Its burden is a ton
Notice how you make burn from burden
and remember how the flames are still turnin'
B-U-R-N
Firecrackers,flames,explosions,and night
B-U-R-N
Candles,pops,and dawn
I see,
I see,
I've seen it all
Flames standing tall
and the burned fall
gah, loved it *bows before thee* 9/10
here's mine, not fond of my last lines though:
IMPURIFIED
Can one remain pure; when borne
Into a world full of scorn
When one’s own fragile wings
Tainted by life’s shortcomings
Cannot lead one to yonder, freed
Of the burden brought by life’s creed
Filth that lingers ‘round this whole
Poison seeps into the soul
Gone all traces of purity
Through clouded eyes now left to see
And wings of silver strayed
From truth; now bent and frayed
Where lies the innocent charm
That goes untouched by harm
Free from fear and pains
Here nothing else remains
The soul that once was true
Abandoned with nothing to do |
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:00 pm
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