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 Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 3:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 3:13 pm
Moon Lily Wolf Why does death have to come and blindsight you? Hit you so quickly you don't even know what to do. Does your life flash before your eyes. Come with all the suprise that you'll be on the this earth that one last time. It's almost like after you full fill you purpose, your gone. Like the world is a game and your only one poun. In this big whole game of life. It's like were all being played in the hands of christ. Someone who just deicieds if you die or not, even if you tried even if you fought. Is it true that you only got one shot. Is it true that things really happen for a reson, or is someone tring to keep the light for some thing to belive in.~Kiki~ Camryan 2001-2006 "R.I.P Little Angel" I was really touched by your poem crying I give it a 10 Here is one i just wrote I'm sitting here writing you today in march not the month of may the sun is out but i am in I feel good i have my friends most I do not know your face I meet you in cyberspace I sit here typing trying to spell the sent of roses come threw my window with there seductive smell I try to think of wit to say I'm in a very good mood today am i a poet myself i cannot judge Very stubborn person my opinions cant be budged Yes i am determined in every way my own worst enemy myself i try to love me A gimps inside of me you can see me like no other i show you through poetry I love you all for your different views I look to you for my daily news about your lives i listen and learn to share it with you i deeply yearn.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:44 pm
^ Your poem seems a little disjointed, but it sounds good 6/10
Here's mine:
A Lifetime of Longing
Welcome to a lifetime of longing. May we take your name?
We have so many others like you who’ve earned this shame.
Please, take a seat; an old flame will be with you in a moment
Just to show you how much you’ve lost and exacerbate your torment.
Let us take your coat, and introduce you to the one of your dreams
The one who wouldn’t look twice at you though your heart gleams.
Would you like something to eat? Or drink, to drown your sorrow
Though you keep a spark of hope alive through the day after tomorrow.
Make yourself at home, just make sure no one falls for you now
We want you to be unlucky in love as much as we can allow.
Keep dwelling on your dreams, my dear, of the ones you’ve loved and lost
The ones you wished loved you, the names on your heart embossed.
And so concludes my speech. Now, new friend, a toast
To a lifetime of longing, to the ones you miss the most.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:39 am
holy crap. you my friend have the beautiful poet soul. u seem a natural at this.
here one of my works.
Don’t push me to the shadows
I don’t want to go into the dark
Keep the light within me
Save my soul from misery
Don’t let the sun go down on me
And turn my heart to stone again
Keep that light alive in me
All you gotta do
Is Save me
Save me, Save my soul
Alight my life
Dispel my fears
Don’t let me sink
Don’t let me fall
Save me
Wash the tears away
The cobwebs in my heart
The sorrow from my eyes
You hold my sanity in your hands
All you gotta do
Is stay
Free me from my blackened world
The darkness that surrounds
With your light
I’m flying free
Without your grace
I’m lost
Save me, Save my soul
Alight my life
Dispel my fears
Don’t let me sink
Don’t let me fall
Save me
Safe in sanity I stay
While you are here around
You light my days
And soften my nights
Save me
You are the heart and soul
The light Of my life
I will save you
Dispel your fears
Wont let you sink
Wont let you fall
Save you
See me now
My light shines
You brought me here
You gave your grace
You saved my soul
Save me, Save my soul
Alight my life
Dispel my fears
Don’t let me sink
Don’t let me fall
Save me
Save me
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:48 pm
Nyah,there were so much poems!! I tried to read as much as I could,but the different emotions made me feel funny @_@ Anyways,I'll read em all later but I had to dtop and say how freakin awesome you guys are so I guess I'll join in the little peom parade! Hmmm thats a good idea, National Poem Parade Day... mrgreen
Where gentle petals fly
and clouds fall from the sky
Is my time zone
Where lonley is being right
and night is light
Is why I haven't shone
Where hearts are still
and being mena isn't against anyones will
Is the place where I'm so alone
Where fire dosen't destroy but only burns
and lessons of love must be learned
Is where I roam
Where theres no sun to shine
and no one can call someone else mine
Is my hearts lonley song and tone
Where love is forgotten and isn't bothered
and dreams are slaughtered
Is supposedly called home
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:57 pm
I really liked your poem! 8 of 10
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:35 pm
Thank you,wow,that one was kinda old,anyway heres another I made up today on the bus lol xD Knowing my loss is your gain
those same thoughts making me insane
The memories slowly calling
and my senses slowly falling
Slowly shifting,slowly drifting
Quietly,ever so silently
The phantoms,shadows,and paranoia
Why do I feel this way today?
I always have to come with a prepared,good lie to say
Maybe its you and not me
Quietly,ever so silently
its not real and I'm just crazy
Too scared to look up or maybe lazy
If I reach out and theres nothing here
If it was or wasn't I'd just confirm my fears
My mind blowing
and my over-active imagionation growing
I don't need anymore lonliness
I can't see through this blindness
For the sake of sanity
don't throw anymore lies at me
For the wake of my heart
If you actaually wanted to help me,
stop me tears to start
But when its broken it can't be fixed
like a long-lost past it can't be stitched
It'll never be the same
and its turning into a game
Quietly,ever so silently
The thoughts of remembering,
the memories are coming
Quietly,ever so silently
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:31 pm
Karinja-chan Thank you,wow,that one was kinda old,anyway heres another I made up today on the bus lol xD Knowing my loss is your gain
those same thoughts making me insane
The memories slowly calling
and my senses slowly falling
Slowly shifting,slowly drifting
Quietly,ever so silently
The phantoms,shadows,and paranoia
Why do I feel this way today?
I always have to come with a prepared,good lie to say
Maybe its you and not me
Quietly,ever so silently
its not real and I'm just crazy
Too scared to look up or maybe lazy
If I reach out and theres nothing here
If it was or wasn't I'd just confirm my fears
My mind blowing
and my over-active imagionation growing
I don't need anymore lonliness
I can't see through this blindness
For the sake of sanity
don't throw anymore lies at me
For the wake of my heart
If you actaually wanted to help me,
stop me tears to start
But when its broken it can't be fixed
like a long-lost past it can't be stitched
It'll never be the same
and its turning into a game
Quietly,ever so silently
The thoughts of remembering,
the memories are coming
Quietly,ever so silently
the poem cry It touched me 10/10 And now It's my turn again : She is the one I always saw but never paid attention When she asked me something I never gave reaction But when I became blind someone took care of me guided me to everything because I could not see Just like I could not see before That whatever you may show or hide Real beauty .. Real beauty lies inside
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 4:31 pm
Loooooooooved it!! heart So simple and yet it has a strong meaning,don't get those too often!!Wish they had a emoticon with a #1 sign jumping up and down...anyway finally someone posted!Meh turn!!Wrote it about a month ago...Kinda random but ya know,its gets to the point
Out lifetime is a bubble
it may seem crazy
But listen,don't give me any trouble
Some of us never make it out,
some of us come out with complications
Some of us out blown about,
some of us blwon on high winds of high sensations
Never is it really fair,
what kind of life we share
and sometimes no one really cares
Some bubbles blow far,
but don't live long enough to know whats really out there
Some stay,
and others drift away
Some go rock bottom,
taste failure,
and others forget or never thought about them
Is it really fair?
That I die sooner by accident, and cause others to pop as well?
Is it really alright?
That my life was turned into a living hell?
Chased away by a stray,
and it was your last day?
You want to keep going and touch the sun?
But not even a zillionth near your already done?
Life proves its too short,
what seems like a bubble,
life is our only resort,
before it gives us out last troubles
Its a wind,not matter what you do,
you'll be blown away even if you didn't deserve it and wasn't meant to
Times foes by,its all a short lie,
it overtime doubles like bubbles even if you seem to fly...
To fly,your wind,
can't be overcome or bend
you can't escape,
becuase every second you get closer to the end
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:47 pm
loved it. especialy the end
Blood red rose
a blood red rose
burning with passion
away it blows
in horrid fashion
a blood red rose
it seems to me
as it grows
it's petals set free
a blood red rose
let innocence bleed
off shye goes
to do the deed
a blood red rose
what else can it be?
the river flows
away from thee
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Kirinkinetic Telepathetic
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:16 pm
Heres one I wrote this morning
'FIRE'
I see a firecracker,
cracking and crumbling
I see burning flames,
turning and tumbling
I see an explosion,
blowing and bursting
I see the night,
darkening and dstroying
See the,rage of fire
Destined,to glow even higher
Fire,curses of the sky
Water,blessings that fly
Why not,create them both?
One to vanquish,one to roast?
I see a candle,
unlite and unattracting
I see a controlled burn,
wanting freedom and enlightening
I see a pop,
steady and startling
I see dawn,
still darkening and still destroying
See the,heat of anger
Touch the,source of danger
Burn,enflame
Turn away and dstroy the shame
I see,
I see,
I see the sun
Shining down too much on me
Its burden is a ton
Notice how you make burn from burden
and remember how the flames are still turnin'
B-U-R-N
Firecrackers,flames,explosions,and night
B-U-R-N
Candles,pops,and dawn
I see,
I see,
I've seen it all
Flames standing tall
and the burned fall
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 9:24 am
crying crying you didn't rate my poem... crying crying
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Kirinkinetic Telepathetic
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 10:17 am
Oh I'm sorry I thought you knew it was awesome!! crying gonk My bad!!
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:13 pm
Karinja-chan Heres one I wrote this morning
'FIRE'
I see a firecracker,
cracking and crumbling
I see burning flames,
turning and tumbling
I see an explosion,
blowing and bursting
I see the night,
darkening and dstroying
See the,rage of fire
Destined,to glow even higher
Fire,curses of the sky
Water,blessings that fly
Why not,create them both?
One to vanquish,one to roast?
I see a candle,
unlite and unattracting
I see a controlled burn,
wanting freedom and enlightening
I see a pop,
steady and startling
I see dawn,
still darkening and still destroying
See the,heat of anger
Touch the,source of danger
Burn,enflame
Turn away and dstroy the shame
I see,
I see,
I see the sun
Shining down too much on me
Its burden is a ton
Notice how you make burn from burden
and remember how the flames are still turnin'
B-U-R-N
Firecrackers,flames,explosions,and night
B-U-R-N
Candles,pops,and dawn
I see,
I see,
I've seen it all
Flames standing tall
and the burned fall
gah, loved it *bows before thee* 9/10
here's mine, not fond of my last lines though:
IMPURIFIED
Can one remain pure; when borne
Into a world full of scorn
When one’s own fragile wings
Tainted by life’s shortcomings
Cannot lead one to yonder, freed
Of the burden brought by life’s creed
Filth that lingers ‘round this whole
Poison seeps into the soul
Gone all traces of purity
Through clouded eyes now left to see
And wings of silver strayed
From truth; now bent and frayed
Where lies the innocent charm
That goes untouched by harm
Free from fear and pains
Here nothing else remains
The soul that once was true
Abandoned with nothing to do
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:00 pm
GAAAAWWWWDDDD!! *bows to you* crying
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