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Dewi opal

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 8:27 am


wow nice poems smile .mayb i should write some 2 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 7:30 pm


Definately, u should.i like ur avi btw Dewi opal.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 9:01 pm


Lost...
Im lost in the sea
not knowing what to do
im thinking about you
or someone else but who?
Im stuck in between
like anyone has seen
but maybe a little different
what can it be?
two relationships in one
Im all but done
but wait, theres more
am I really sure?
who shall i choose?
Him or maybe you
so many questions without any answer
just like the sea
with many unknowns
goes down so deep
all the way to the floor...
PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:51 pm


That's a good poem....I hope things go well.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:33 am


Empty, the boy watches
As she goes away
He doesn’t know
That he wants her to stay
The boy couldn’t find the words to say
She cries, he lies himself safe
But now he knows he made a big mistake
He wants to run and beg
It’s too late, already a new day
She leaves, yet stays in the boy’s heart
Now it’s really starting to hurt
So the boy leaves town
He goes out and around
Searching for the girl
Whose heart he broke
He searched everywhere
For this girl
When he found her
He was so nervous he nearly hurled
He called her and tried to say
The way he felt all along
But she stopped him
Remembering what he had done
She hung up the phone
He didn’t plan for this
The boy cried of a mistake he once made
Even though it was a year, plus
He still loved her
And just wanted to say so
Although he never got his chance
So he went home trying to force her away
She called him back
Feeling sorry for the other day
She got together and talked
The boy found out he was too late
Because the girl loved another
The boy backed off
Didn’t want her to go a difficult way
She cried
Realizing that she could never be the same
The boy called back
For his selfish love
The boy wanted her
He wanted no one else
And she wanted no one else
Deep down inside
She said sorry
And she cried
But she walked away
Only to regret it
Another day
PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 8:45 am


*applauses* 100/10 very beautiful shadowfire. it was adorable, u must be a pro

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 3:53 pm


this i wrote a long time ago...
(sorry if there are some mistakes)

Why words can't i find?
words that may aid my life?
Why does it seem that i've gone dry?
All these feelings i cant purge;
is it that theese new things i feel
going beyond in the future,
i must not show or reveal?
How many words can my eyes say?
words that guide me in true way...?
it would seem as if i could fly...
then fall wounded as a bird
and on earth with pleasure to die
because my heart couldn't get heard
only with one word,
which means all to whom have learned,
nothing to those who haven't learned;
many winters may pass
walk by, waiting for winter to come
flowers waiting only for sun
just as my heart waits for someone...
but when guide comes from above
shows us our loved one,
may pain rest in peace
and love have a feast
taking place in the honored seat,
showing to all who have come
that she is my only true love...
so now i've wished to know
if there was one word to show
that deeply i love her so...
PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:48 pm


"Until we Meet" and "Can you see it in my eyes?" were both very touching and heartfelt. They both have a nice rhythm, and seem to be very believable and vivid. Great Job, Julep

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