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[Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX]

Juubi-Kira no Ryuu

Marcus is approved.

Welcome back ol' chap  

[Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX]

Hitsukei

Ichiro is approved =D  

[Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX]

Lady Niara

Welcome back Niara to your second year of Ordell emotion_bigheart
Welcome Hailey Winter to Ordell Academy emotion_rainbow

X Kaos X

Welcome back Tera to your second year of Ordell. emotion_bigheart  

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Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX

Thank for your patience ^^ the following characters are approved welcome to Ordell Academy!

- Iris Haruno
- Lilith Erza
- Naomi Amatulli

We will be starting Year 2 soon and we will be giving the new students their gear when that happens so for now you can use the Pokemon World Open RP to make some posts until we open 3nodding  

[Shadow of Miracles]

Hitsukei

Thank you for your patience and I'm very sorry for my delay ^^;

This profile is great 3nodding and thus it gets my approval, but before I make it official I noticed that the Furfrou is a shiny Pokemon so I just need to make sure that you're okay with giving up your shiny encounter so that your character may bring this shiny Furfrou to the academy.

You would still have the PokeDazzler which would allow you to change one pokemon to its shiny form, but no more shiny encounter.  

[Hitsukei]

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Hitsukei

Thank you for your patience and I'm very sorry for my delay ^^;

This profile is great 3nodding and thus it gets my approval, but before I make it official I noticed that the Furfrou is a shiny Pokemon so I just need to make sure that you're okay with giving up your shiny encounter so that your character may bring this shiny Furfrou to the academy.

You would still have the PokeDazzler which would allow you to change one pokemon to its shiny form, but no more shiny encounter.

Thank you for accepting Artesia. I have no problem giving up the character’s only wild shiny encounter. I had seen in the rules on shiny pokemon that students are allowed to bring a shiny to the academy in lieu of finding one in the wild, so I figured I’d go that route.  

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Hitsukei

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Hitsukei

Thank you for your patience and I'm very sorry for my delay ^^;

This profile is great 3nodding and thus it gets my approval, but before I make it official I noticed that the Furfrou is a shiny Pokemon so I just need to make sure that you're okay with giving up your shiny encounter so that your character may bring this shiny Furfrou to the academy.

You would still have the PokeDazzler which would allow you to change one pokemon to its shiny form, but no more shiny encounter.

Thank you for accepting Artesia. I have no problem giving up the character’s only wild shiny encounter. I had seen in the rules on shiny pokemon that students are allowed to bring a shiny to the academy in lieu of finding one in the wild, so I figured I’d go that route.

Awesome ^^ in that we welcome Asteria into Ordell Academy  

[SpazzticPanda1311]

Shadow of Miracles

Elaine Myers is ready to be reviewed emotion_awesome  

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SpazzticPanda1311

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Elaine Myers is ready to be reviewed emotion_awesome

This profile is approved! Welcome back Elaine ^^  

[Prairiefox]

Shadow of Miracles

Koru Frene and Ramona are ready for review 4laugh  

[ShyWolfHeart]

not sure if I need to post here Elijah Abney is ready for review when anyone is able to look at it.  

[Prairiefox]

Juubi-Kira no Ryuu

Sky Li-Montes has been approved!
Harvey Jay Bennett has been approved!  

[Prairiefox]

ShyWolfHeart

not sure if I need to post here Elijah Abney is ready for review when anyone is able to look at it.

Elijah Abney is approved! Sorry that took a while hun!  

[Shadow of Miracles]

Wind Hime Princess

Thank you very much for your patience ^^ I have read your character profile and everything seems to be in order, she sounds like an interesting character.

However,

We must discuss her psychic abilities. When reading through the profile it felt like this "psychic" power was thrown in without too much purpose. You also do not explain exactly what her psychic powers do only that she was put to sleep because of them and that now they're under control after some training. She is pretty young so exactly when did she develop these powers and how is it that at a young age she managed to gain control over them? Even, Sabrina (without a doubt the strongest psychic in the pokemon anime) didn't really have her powers under control and rather they seemed to control her instead.

What I'm saying is that if we remove the psychic powers from the profile, it does not change anything about her (per se). I need more information about these psychic powers and how they are important to her character as well as her future because as of right now it only feels like it was a last minute decision.

I'm not against having a character with special abilities, but I want it to be more developed because having a psychic can change a lot in this kind of RP that is plot-heavy. So if you'd like for your character to have psychic powers then convince me by giving me more details about its importance to her character as well as what these powers are 3nodding

Please quote me with your response.  

[Shadow of Miracles]

Prairiefox

Both profiles were wonderful to read ^^ I approve of them both! Welcome back to the academy biggrin