Please comment its my favorite

[Ronin Samura]

hello this is a poem ive written and its my favorita of them all i hope you enjoy it

Finding you

Lost and alone.
Afraid in the dark.
Searching for you.
My light in the dark.
I need to find you.
I must find you.
I'm walking in circles.
Trying to find you.
I hope o fond you.
I know I'll find you.
When will I find you?
How long will it take?
How long must I search.
How long must I wait.
I walk.
I run.
I crawl.
I search.
I do everything I can and yet I still can't find you.
Finally I sit and wait.
I sit in depression.
I sit and think about you.
I feel a tap on my shoulder.
I look behind me.
You found me.  

[Chortleasd]

That was....was...slightly original and very...aah crap whats the word for it?....D***it...anyway it was awesome! =^-^= Rate mine too!  

[Ronin Samura]

thnak you ^_^ -runs off to comment yours-  

[Chortleasd]

Everytme I look at it I feel better <3

 

[Ronin Samura]

thank you im glad i could make you feel better ^_^  

[Chortleasd]

Yup, still making me feel better....

 

[Sharima]

This poem was very nicely done...it's depressing at first and then comforting at the end. I like these kind of poems! You should post some of your other ones too! smile