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Kirinkinetic Telepathetic
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 Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 5:45 pm
Blood spouts down,
like pouring rain,
you look at me on the ground,
with hate and disdain,
crimson streaks my face,
I'll kill you now,
never leave this place,
I don't know how,
warm and slick,
like heart's desire,
makes me sick,
my body's on fire,
metallic and salty,
a sickly scent,
imperfect and faulty,
it reaches it's vent.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 1:43 pm
WOot!!First comment two in a row!! I'm on fire!! I like how you expressed it and used plenty of adjectives,I can see it!! xD......wait...eww...
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:04 am
really emotional and tragic... sad really good... biggrin
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