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 Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:02 pm
Hello! I'm panda_fanatic and I was asked to join this guild. I write poetry and I was wondering if anyone would rate my poem and give me some critiquing. Here we go.............
“Natures Beauties”
SPRING
Birds sing in the trees.
Like little bells, they chime in.
Pretty harmony!
SUMMER
Through a winding path,
The river glides forever,
Filled with living things.
AUTUMN
Leaves float to the ground,
Never knowing where they’ll land,
Gliding through the air.
WINTER
The snow capped Mountains.
Oh! What a glorious sight,
Glow in the suns rays.
Nature’s beauties live,
Always changing and growing,
Always so wondrous.
Leave me a comment please! Thank you.
Oh, and I wrote this poem in 6th grade...I'm in 11th now..heh heh ^^;
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 12:38 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:01 pm
Aww! Thank you! *huggles*
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